[原创]努力再写第三篇twe25

xiaolongxia

It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Recently, a piece of news announced that a large shopping center will be built in my neighborhood. Some people advocate the plan, holding the opinion that city economy will increase thanks to the new Shopping center. However, other people doubt that whether it is a wise choice to build such a shopping mall. As my point of view, I think building a new shopping center bring more benefit to our city.

Firstly, the new shopping mall will provide a great deal of job opportunity. There a large number

of people unemployed in our city due to fewer job vacancy. An increasing number of citizens migrate to large city to pursue decent job. While, if we build a new shopping center, majority of unemployed people can find their new job such as shop accouter, guardsmen and so forth. Hence, people don't have to move to another city to struggle for the food and shelter they need. As the result, unemployment in our city will reduce by large.

There's no doubt that new shopping center brings about plenty of convenience. In the past, people have no alternative but to drive long hours to nearby city to buy food, which waste much time. On the contrary, this problem can be easily solved by the new setting shop. People can go shopping with friends or family any time if they want. More over, it is more convenient to get refund or change for goods.

And most important, it is a good way to save money. That because the shopping center supply amount of quality commodity in reasonable price. Besides, people don't have to spend so much money on transportation as before.

Though the plan also carries along some minor drawback; such as crowd ness and traffic jam. Overall, benefit is outweighing than the disadvantages. I expect the promising future of our city thanks to the new shopping mall.

xiaolongxia

列了一些提纲之后，思路很快come up了，但是在写段落的时候，还是很困难

xiaolongxia

作文总是超时20分钟左右，怎么办啊？

Joypan

以下是引用xiaolongxia在2006-11-28 21:25:00的发言：
作文总是超时20分钟左右，怎么办啊？

不要太着急。在紧急情况下思路会集中的，时间上应该会比平时所用时间有所缩短的。不过，还是多看看模版，注意搜集例证之类的，心中有材料，才会坐而不乱。现在太过着急也不是办法。得一来，看看自己的弱势到底在哪里，到底是什么造成了时间的延迟。是因为举例还是因为结构或者是其他？好好总结一下吧。心态要好。在心态不好的情况下造成的焦虑更容易影响看书或者是复习的效果的。

xiaolongxia

大致思路还是有的，就是些段落的时候，想不起具体的例子

xiaolongxia

我看了李笑来的范文，觉得结构很随意，不好模仿，请问强化结构看什么比较好啊？

山衔落日

其实新东方还有一本很好的作文书，《挑战TOEFL作文满分》，里面有大量托福写作的技巧，最近还出了新版，叫《挑战TOEFL iBT 作文满分》。

for一

来不及买了啊

cestmoi

我写作文要么没思路要么思路太乱……

xiaolongxia

有电子版的下吗？