让砖头来得更猛烈些吧TWE013

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Issue13  第1篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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从2006年9月27日22时57分到2006年9月27日23时30分
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13. Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Where will you eat? at home or restaurant? Differenet people give different answers. Some people would go to the restaurant because they think that it is convenient to eat there. But others would like to cook the meal themselves for that it is very interesting for them to cook at home. In my opinion, I agree with the latter. There are several reasons for this.

In the first place, it is very economic to cook the dinner by yourself. If you want to prepare the meal by yourself, then you just need to go to the supermarket buying some vegetables and meat. Nowadays, the vegetables are washed and the meat is sliced well before they come to the supermarket. Hence, you are not required to spend your time to prepare them before cooking. Besides, there are also a lot of little packages, in which the flavors are put in proportion, in the supmarket. This means that we would not need to learn much about cooking before we prepare our dinner. The only thing we should do is putting the vegetables, meat and the flavor together and control the time. Because we can buy those raw materials quite cheaply, we could save much money comparing with eating at the restaurant.

In the second place, it is also very safe and healthy to prepare the meals by yourself. At present, a lot of resturants would use the oil and meat of low quality to cook the dish in order to cut the cost, and these inferior things would threaten the people's health. Moreover, to prepare the dish quickly, some resturant would let the vegetables and meat boil in the oil for a short time, thus the dish would contain too much oil, and people would become too fat if they usually have this kind of food. However, if the food is prepared by ourselves, we can choose the good vegetables and meat, and we would also use proper quatity of oil in the dish. In other words, we would prepare a much healthier meal.

In a word, we should prepare the dinner by ourselves. By doing so, we could cook a healthier meal but using less money.

Joy_Pan

我觉得文章当中的人称的使用应该一致。如果一会儿you,一会儿we，整篇文章不是特协调。而且使用第二人称，教条性太强。斗胆拍砖。不好意思。