向改错高手们请教一道题目?

njsjfr · 发表于 2003-10-15 19:31:00

In 1990’s, there are more babies were born by women over thirty years old than under it.
A than under it.
B than were they under it.
C than had been under it
D than were the babies.
E than those were under it.

我不知道参考答案, 大家讨论一下, 我个人在(A)和(E)之间犹豫不决.

chenmoon · 发表于 2003-10-15 20:34:00

哪里的题目？

ricesu · 发表于 2003-10-15 21:21:00

个人倾向于a
理由：1）e德those指代不清，从句的代词优先指代主句主语，而主句主语是babies
2) 前面是there be，后面是those were，不符合平行结构
a虽然省略的利害一点，凑合着还像样吧，不知道诸位大大的意见呢
印象中，这种时间，地点的比较，是可以这样省略的

chenmoon · 发表于 2003-10-15 21:31:00

问一个问题，这句前面部分there are ... were born by ... 算不算run-on sentence啊？

njsjfr · 发表于 2003-10-19 08:55:00

是一道朋友告诉我的十月份真题.

tony6 · 发表于 2003-10-19 09:13:00

是老题吧，偶认为是A，因为在THAN之前有两个复数代词BABIES和WOMEN，用THOSE反而指代不清，另外这个比较是在修饰成分中，直接用省略后的UNDER表达更好一点。

snowdrop1 · 发表于 2003-10-19 09:17:00

题目没有记完整吧？
题干就有问题，
a不对，it能指代thirty years old ？

yzlinlin · 发表于 2003-10-19 18:51:00

A，简练清晰干脆。

E容易有歧义，其中的were使得整句的平行仿佛是：more babies were born...than those were....

向改错高手们请教一道题目?

向改错高手们请教一道题目?

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