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TWE001, 第一篇文章。超时10分钟。水平不高欢迎拍转

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发表于 2006-8-24 12:31:00 | 只看该作者

TWE001, 第一篇文章。超时10分钟。水平不高欢迎拍转

题目: Why should we go to university?

More and more people are attending university to meet the requirement of modern society and the job market nowadays. Most students may have not thought of “why go to university” before they enter college. I think it’s necessary for us to think over this before we go to college in order to find out does it worth to spend a big sum of money to study in university. In my opinion, attending college does not only ensure us knowledge, but also acts as a transition between the absolute academic environment of high school and the society. It benefits us a lot because we can get more experience and meet people with different backgrounds as well as study knowledge.

Centuries ago, colleges are exclusively accessible to the rich. People who attended universities do not have to worry about their lives when they graduated. At that time, subjects in the universities were mostly in academic areas, such as arts, philosophy, literature, theology etc. But in modern times, universities add such more practical subjects as engineering, computer and architectonics. Only very few of the students in such areas could do further study after graduate and become scholars or scientists. Even some more academic subjects have integrated some practical courses to meet the demand of the job market. Students who do not attend college and go to work directly after high school may find some difficulties to face a brand new environment of the society. In this aspect, university serves as a preparation of the students for their future work and becomes more necessary for us to enter.

Some people may say that we can also get practical skills from “skill schools”. Admittedly, these skill schools may impart us more skills and experience than university. But if we read the “Job” column of a newspaper, we may find such requirement of many companies: ‘a bachelor or higher degree is required’. Universities do not only give us knowledge, skills and experience, but also, apparently, a diploma, which means an access to more decent, better paid jobs. By this mean, it is likely to be compulsory for us to go to university.

I once heard a student complain: ‘One of my friends who go to a skill-school has found a well-paid job, but I’m still worrying about the tuition and still have to depend on my parents’. Are the above said all we can get from university? I do not think so. We can meet different people with different backgrounds in university, who may help me a lot both in the university and in the future. More and more MBA programs have added ‘alumni’ in their advertisements to make them more competitive, because alumnus is playing a very important role in modern business world.

Knowing these all above, I think we can give a clear answer to the question that whether we should attend university. The knowledge, experience, capability and alumni which you get from a university will finally pay back your tuition and several years of time.


[此贴子已经被作者于2006-8-24 19:59:43编辑过]
沙发
发表于 2006-8-24 15:52:00 | 只看该作者

小豆包,标题改成 TWE001

麻烦把题目贴一下

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-24 20:00:00 | 只看该作者
已改
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-24 20:01:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢南瓜姐

5#
发表于 2006-8-24 21:50:00 | 只看该作者
已阅.
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-24 22:16:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用Joypan在2006-8-24 21:50:00的发言:
已阅.

谢谢蝈蝈,可是别跟小学时候家长签字一样啊。。。拍砖啊

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发表于 2006-8-25 17:10:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用charmant在2006-8-24 12:31:00的发言:

More and more people are attending university to meet the requirement of modern society and the job market nowadays. Most students may have not thought of “why go to university” before they enter college. I think it’s necessary for us to think over this before we go to college in order to find out does it worth to spend a big sum of money to study in university. In my opinion, attending college does not only ensure us knowledge, but also acts as a transition between the absolute academic environment of high school and the society. It benefits us a lot because we can get more experience and meet people with different backgrounds as well as study knowledge.

Centuries ago, colleges are exclusively accessible to the rich. People who attended universities do not have to worry about their lives when they graduated. At that time, subjects in the universities were mostly in academic areas, such as arts, philosophy, literature, theology etc. But in modern times, universities add such more practical subjects as engineering, computer and architectonics. Only very few of the students in such areas could do further study after graduate and become scholars or scientists. Even some more academic subjects have integrated some practical courses to meet the demand of the job market. Students who do not attend college and go to work directly after high school may find some difficulties to face a brand new environment of the society. In this aspect, university serves as a preparation of the students for their future work and becomes more necessary for us to enter.

Some people may say that we can also get practical skills from “skill schools”. Admittedly, these skill schools may impart us more skills and experience than university. But if we read the “Job” column of a newspaper, we may find such requirement of many companies: ‘a bachelor or higher degree is required’. Universities do not only give us knowledge, skills and experience, but also, apparently, a diploma, which means an access to more decent, better paid jobs. By this mean, it is likely to be compulsory for us to go to university.

I once heard a student complain: ‘One of my friends who go to a skill-school has found a well-paid job, but I’m still worrying about the tuition and still have to depend on my parents’. Are the above said all we can get from university? I do not think so. We can meet different people with different backgrounds in university, who may help me a lot both in the university and in the future. More and more MBA programs have added ‘alumni’ in their advertisements to make them more competitive, because alumnus is playing a very important role in modern business world.

Knowing these all above, I think we can give a clear answer to the question that whether we should attend university. The knowledge, experience, capability and alumni which you get from a university will finally pay back your tuition and several years of time.


charmant,以上有蓝色标记的地方是我认为不妥的地方,包括语法,累赘,用法不地道,指代不明等。具体的如何,你再看看。然后再商榷。。

斗胆拍砖了。见笑。

8#
 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-25 20:22:00 | 只看该作者

非常感谢蝈蝈不怕麻烦拍我

我仔细品味斟酌

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发表于 2006-8-25 20:26:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用charmant在2006-8-25 20:22:00的发言:

非常感谢蝈蝈不怕麻烦拍我

我仔细品味斟酌

my pleasure

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-25 20:27:00 | 只看该作者

蝈蝈指出来的地方我还是不太明白。谁能指教指教阿。

etc. do什么的不妥吗?

我记得看哪本书上说正式写作的时候要用 do not, it is, cannot而最好不要用don't, it's, can't。是吗?

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