题号 | 
考点归类 | 
具体考点 | 
本题体现 | 
知识点 | 
11 | 
平行对称 | 
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to revamp..institute…and and create.. | 
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逻辑意思 | 
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(B)organization that takes indicate the organization exist: illogical | 
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简洁 | 
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C,D: for taking is not precise and idiomatic. To is in order to | 
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12 | 
词汇 | 
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replace declension with decline; gradually declining, | 
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简洁 | 
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declining down is redundant | 
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词汇 | 
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After and follow: After is correct | 
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13 | 
对比 | 
最高级 | 
the tenth most……the most intense | 
当比较两个事物以上时,要使用最高级 | 
词汇 | 
the的省与不省 | 
the tenth most……the most intense,不能省 | 
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词汇 | 
the的省与不省 | 
the most frightening and most ntense, the 能省 | 
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词汇 | 
since & after | 
since emphasizes the continuity of the action | 
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简洁 | 
wordy and awkward | 
which had Camille,; Since 1969 and Camile, the most intense | 
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14 | 
词汇 | 
双重否定 | 
do not and nothing 产生双重否定 | 
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anything  should be used instead of nothing | 
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逻辑结构 | 
意思结构产生歧义 | 
"and: "or" | 
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15 | 
逻辑结构 | 
对比 | 
分词“supplementing"通常是修饰主句,描叙或extend it's meaning, 但这句的逻辑意思是对比, | 
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时态 | 
动词时态一致 | 
B主句是简单的过去时“were", | 
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简洁 | 
awkard and unclear | 
But with; and even though creat a sentence fragment | 
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16 | 
词汇 | 
习惯用语 | 
in contrast with x, y…;   in contrast to x, y…; unlike x, y…; | 
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对比 | 
逻辑意思平行 | 
B: he honeybee's  & the yellow jacket; | 
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对比 | 
逻辑意思平行 | 
C: the sting of the honeybee & the yellow jeacket | 
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对比 | 
逻辑意思平行 | 
D: that of the honeybee & the yellow jacket | 
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17 | 
对比 | 
动词平行 | 
most of the people exposed to the alleged causes, & so many of those not so exposed;因为第一个动词是do not commit, 第二个动词应该平行do | 
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18 | 
句子结构 | 
run - on sentence | 
A) they are- run on sentence | 
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correct: so too are modems, the devices | 
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词汇 | 
idiom | 
to allow isnot an idiomatic way to modify devices. Either "that allow" or "allowing" would be correct | 
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19 | 
词汇 | 
动名词 | 
attempt 代替 trying | 
-ing可以做名词,但often awkward, partickularly when used with a pssdessive | 
简洁 | 
wordy | 
chemical that is irritating it' and checmical irristating it | 
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简洁 | 
reluctant | 
attempt to try is redundant | 
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20 | 
逻辑结构 | 
平行 | 
modifier to describe the noun: using accounts of various writers correctly modifies scholars | 
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代词 | 
指代不清 | 
B: it does not have a clear refrerence | 
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简洁 | 
wordy and awkward | 
C: by the accounts of various ancient writers they used; D: by the accounts of various ancient writhers they use | 
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21 | 
词汇 | 
idiom | 
estimated at | 
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单复数 | 
主谓一致 | 
fragments + provide | 
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22 | 
句子结构 | 
平行 | 
receiving, fetching and exciting | 
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代词 | 
指代不清 | 
unclear referent for it | 
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23 | 
比较 | 
最高级 | 
compare"an adverse change" to "all" possible disasters, the superlative form"most difficult" must be used | 
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词汇 | 
idiom | 
probably replace maybe | 
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词汇 | 
idiom | 
difficult to analysis instead of for analysis | 
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24 | 
修饰语与从句 | 
逻辑结构 | 
protecting表目的状语从句items of military equipment, | 
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单复数 | 
主从句一致 | 
items…, a method should not refer to the plural items | 
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简洁 | 
awkard and unclear | 
a method to protect, | 
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25 | 
句子结构 | 
主从句 | 
the second part of the sentence explain the first: use because to introduce a subordinate clause | 
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句子结构 | 
逻辑结构 | 
being they live( E) is illigocal | 
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简洁 | 
awkard and wordy | 
on account of (A,B) | 
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单复数 | 
主从句一致 | 
crab…,it(B,E: they) | 
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词汇 | 
idiom | 
because of living (D) | 
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26 | 
比较 | 
结构平行 | 
same to x as to y, or the same to someone..as to a person | 
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句子结构 | 
分号 | 
water; just as to be(c,E) ";" create a sentence fragment | 
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27 | 
词汇 | 
idiom | 
in danger of contracting(A) is correct | 
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简洁 | 
wordy and ungrammatical | 
"have a danger" is not correct idiom and structure is wordy and ungrammatical | 
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28 | 
词汇 | 
idiom | 
depends on must follow by whether not if | 
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词汇 | 
idiom | 
ability to broaden instead of of "for broadening" | 
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简洁 | 
wordy | 
"it has the capability to "create an wordy construction | 
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简洁 | 
wordy | 
the ability for it to broaden is wordy,awkward,and ungrammatical | 
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29 | 
词汇 | 
idiom | 
seem to | 
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句子结构 | 
从句的连接词 | 
从句连接词(who,which,that)or by a conjunction, 但不能用Like连接 | 
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30 | 
比较 | 
惯用对比词 | 
as much as : they like x as much as Y | 
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比较 | 
惯用对比词 | 
not so much as 用于否定比较:not so much as a whisper was heard from the crowd | 
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副词 | 
副词的位置 | 
even修饰the strongest businesses,所以要放在之前 | 
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