[讨论]OG11th-103

jandjshi

一看原贴，说答案是C, 差点pass out。后来才看到后面那个问号. . 我也说是D

谈谈个人对E的想法：E can cause discrepancy:

1. rocket...will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle. 变成rocket可以把instructions送入orbit和送入space shuttle,这两者比。

D用了can，就很明确是两主语rocket和space shuttle之间比了。

而且D中a lower cost和a heavier load 平行。E中 to deliver 和to cost 平行, cost 这样用是动词，但这里没有宾语，to cost "Who" less? cost space shuttle less? cost rocket less? 意思上看是cost United States less?  但"United States" 在前面, 离得太远了。 就是ETS最喜欢说的"oject is not immediately clear".

还有seasnow说的rocket把美国带到了... 我也觉得看得胃里痒痒的。觉得像B那样，developement...is expected to carry the US比较好，但B也没有Can，所以还是D好。

我是新手，有错的地方，请！！！

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-1-31 8:14:27编辑过]

seasnow

我觉得D和E的差别在于意思上。

不是要去cost less，而是要使之at a lower cost。

shamoguzhou

以下是引用carlito在2006-1-23 12:49:00的发言：

在c中，than是指heavier,不是lower cost，所以d是正确答案

c中是development和SS比较了,而D中是Cr和ss比较.c比较对象错了,所以d对. 对吗?

steveyangxt

以下是引用seasnow在2006-2-6 17:12:00的发言：

我觉得D和E的差别在于意思上。

不是要去cost less，而是要使之at a lower cost。

同意，一个做成主句了，一个是介宾短语，肯定是后者了。

forgetee

谁有OG的正确答案？

jandjshi

今天OG11才寄到. 等了一个月. 汗.

OG11th 答案: D.

E: Verb can is needed after space shuttle to create a correct comparison; to cost less is confusing because it seems to parallel to to deliver.

哈佛情人

以下是引用v521在2006-1-23 12:58:00的发言：
后面的and at a lower cost指的是谁？不也是jr比ss么？放在一起为什么不可以？

A newly developed jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle can, and (will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit) at a lower cost.

是不是这个意思？

请大家指教！！

WhistleLi

OG 11 答案 分析

A-The subject should be the rocket,not its development,verb can is needed after space shuttle to create a correct comparision;that should be replaced by which and the clause should be set off with commas

B-The subject should be the rocket,not its development,verb can is needed after space shuttle to create a correct comparision

C-The subject should be the rocket,not its development,verb can is needed after space shuttle create a correct comparision.

D-best. The rocket is the subject of his sentence;the comparision between rocket and the shuttle is clear;the nonrestrictive clause is correctly introduced and punctuated.

E-Verbe can is needed after space shuttle to create a correct comparision;to cost less is confusing because it seems to parallel to deliver.

WhistleLi

OG 11 答案 分析

A-The subject should be the rocket,not its development,verb can is needed after space shuttle to create a correct comparision;that should be replaced by which and the clause should be set off with commas

B-The subject should be the rocket,not its development,verb can is needed after space shuttle to create a correct comparision

C-The subject should be the rocket,not its development,verb can is needed after space shuttle create a correct comparision.

D-best. The rocket is the subject of his sentence;the comparision between rocket and the shuttle is clear;the nonrestrictive clause is correctly introduced and punctuated.

E-Verbe can is needed after space shuttle to create a correct comparision;to cost less is confusing because it seems to parallel to deliver.

Dinaxie

以下是引用哈佛情人在2006-5-15 0:22:00的发言：

A newly developed jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle can, and (will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit) at a lower cost.

是不是这个意思？

请大家指教！！

我觉得：A newly developed jumbo rocket, which is expected to carry the United States into its next phase of space exploration, will be able to deliver a heavier load of instruments into orbit than the space shuttle can, and （will be able to deliver at a lower cost than space shuttle can）请指教