逻辑错误：A illogically suggests that it is the composer who goes into decline after death, rather than the composer's reputation
罗嗦：A,D, never regains ... again
句子结构：B is not correct. Grammatically, a coordinating conjunction (e.g., "but") is needed to join the clause whose reputation declines ...
时态
247
A
平行
不定式：表目的用不定式最爽
248
C
平行：not only did ..but also did…./ 注意： 并列中，一个用主动，一个用被动就不平行了，D
代词指代：必须清晰明确，avoids ambiguity of reference by using these companies rather than them.
249
A B
动词优于名词：用动词主动最好-直接
定从：In A, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians(1 逗号加 that 不对，2 限定非限定，局部和整体的关系) / that不可以作非限制定语从句引导词
主谓（单复数）一致：Both C and D begin with the singular was; the compound subject of this verb is plural: repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style
罗嗦：C, D, choices also may be faulted for wordiness and redundancy in their use of was different significantly in comparison to and differed significantly when compared to.
250
B
平行：that x and that y
时态
would可以用在一般现在时中, refer to a promised but uncertain future event
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