有几个不大明白的地方问一下楼主：
把题目复述一下________________? To some
extent, I agree with the speaker’s general assertion--on the basis of
_________（这里是要写发生的条件么？）--that__________ （这里重复题目？）if *** （还是条件？）(give the condition under which we can
support the author’s idea). However, the speaker unnecessarily extends
this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain
compelling factors impacting this issue. On balance, My points of
agreement and contention with the speaker involve the fundamental and
deep analysis, as discussed below.
On
the one hand, it is sagacious to admit that this statement, although
suffers from some obvious drawbacks, possesses some merits primarily in
some special cases in which the implicit rationale behind it accords
with common sense and our everyday experience as human beings, hence,
is partially indisputable. After all, in this era of social and
technological changes leading to increasing progress, (you may point
that the condition is possible to occur
here） __________________________________.One could effortlessly
imagine the scenario, in which ___________________（说能发生？） Accordingly, I tend to concede that when it comes to some certain circumstances it is partially appropriate.
On
the other hand, recognizing that a more applicable choice must
incorporate aspects of the issue as sufficient as possible, I have to
point out my contention with the speaker who,
while overstating______’s comparative significance, does not take into
account some paramount essential factors, at which thoughtless people
casually take a fresh look. Surging out nowadays, the phenomena, in
which________, firmly construe the fact that________. Moreover,
___________.（这几个空不是很明白，能否具体解释一下？）For instance, _____________. I remembered the words the
head of my university once said( and I paraphrase )that,. AAA is one of
the key words of our times, A man without AAA（这个AAA是根据题目内容来的么？）, may of us believe, is an
unfortunate victim of advance circumstance, deprived of one of the
greatest twentieth-century opportunities. All the compelling evidence
above demonstrates beyond any reasonable doubt that_____.
Coincidentally,
a general investigation has been conducted by _____ institute in my
university recently, discovering that_____________,. So, it is, at
least ostensibly, to bolster the view that_______.(75% respondents tend
to agree on the point that ________ . )Thus, my claim is not a mere
appeal but a fact verified by statistics.
In
conclusion, issue of ____________is a complex one, requiring subjective
judgment, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers. So
different are the personal experience, and emotional concern among
people with diverse culture that thousand individuals might possess
thousand opinions towards this issue. In the final analysis, according
to me, ________________.（还要重新说一下自己支持是吧？）
lz的这个模板的意思是好坏两方面都说，具体问题具体分析，然后自己有个倾向是吧？ 谢谢了～～
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