以下是引用111cara在2006-10-18 18:06:00的发言：召唤对D的解释.. D错的严重,run-on句 Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
A. Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled
as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore. B. Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery. C. With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century. D. The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
[run-on] E. Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century. A 其实没什么严重错误,除了as a result of [原因一] and because [原因二]看得很不开心,其实它的逻辑意思大体正确, 我认为over the course of the 18C没问题,强调过程不算redundant B in addition to用法错误 C 首先charocoal不是人,不能用Sb's, 其次没必要用being replaced,这种形式在OG百分之百都错, 第三the last but not least, With...仅表伴随,没办法有效表达是因为XXX而引起XXX, 如果要讲事情发生的原因,最好的方式还是要表达出because或as a result of这种因果关系强烈的句型 [关于with伴随这点可参考OG里的例子] D 先看句子结构就错了, The replacement of charcoal..., the average output of ironwork tripled....这不是run-on是什么? E就不讲了 结论: 当然选A了 | 
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