GWD 17-18 选项中带有With charcoal’s being replaced 也是答案？

111cara

召唤对D的解释..

xiaowan

几天后考试，今天复习到这题，D对，D不一定是同位语结构啊，可以是名词性的独立主格，表示伴随，没有问题

lazyratcn

顶一下，哪位NN出来解释下阿，到底选啥

cxvv

Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

 

1. Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore. 别扭啊
2. Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
3. With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century. 又不平行,又别扭
4. The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century. 不对
5. Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century. 不平行,无主

查了一下GOOGLE

有句话是

By 1875, coke (which is made from coal) replaced charcoal as the primary fuel for iron blast furnaces to make steel.

另外一句原句是

In eighteenth-century Britain, coal replaced charcoal as the fuel in the smelting of iron ore. As well, improvements in blowing machinery allowed a tripling of the average size of ironworks over the course of the eighteenth century.
   

又查了一下with complete replacement of charcoal by coke 是可以的

查了一下

REPLACE STH AS

THE REPALCEMENT OF STH BY STH AS

THE REPLACEMENT OF STH WITH STH AS

却没有

THE REPLACEMENT OF STH WITH STH FOR

不知道答案因次是不是应该选A

NN 帮忙啊

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kaochieh

我也選A, 後來想想選C.....供參考!

1. Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a

    result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal

    as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.　

  

   adv. phase vs. adv. clause 不平行
    

2. With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and 

    several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over

    the eighteenth century.
    

    with A and B 結構  = WITH A (one's ving(動名詞))  + B (名詞)

 

    介係詞+ N/ Ving, 所以改成 所有格+Ving..此時式動名詞不可省略!

sabrina07

woyuhong

这种题目太痛苦了………………

seraph1987

我是想说那个as a result of 和后面的BECAUSE不是有冗余的嫌疑么，我倒是觉得E没什么错，除了那个BEING，ETS不是同样病态得追求简洁么，难道以后做题碰到BEING就全部把它归结为是错的吗？

chixigua

as a result of 和because 重复, 罗嗦

shenphon

現在要回復才能用捲軸,真麻煩