以下是引用mango在2003-9-6 21:06:00的发言: I have a couple of friends who are HBS graduates(americans), they helped me review my essays last year. One thing that impressed me most is how they helped me changed the tone of my essays, it is all about "ME, ME, ME". Maybe that sounds too aggressive. It might work well for HBS, but not for others. I really don't know. I applied for second round last year, but this time I will try first round and see if it will make a difference.
yeah, that may be a problem. The tone is really important. And the perspective of a problem is also important.
In fact, I believe we need to adapt our essays to each school, both style and tone. |