更新：确认了，是chatgpt写的，我后来自己去研究了一下，发现写出来的东西确实语法什么都挺好，就是没内容。难怪这么便宜。。。润色英文一般都没什么问题。我自己也懂一点开发，闲暇时间搞了个AI润色器，不过似乎平台上不可以发，发了会删帖。（虽然不懂为什么，是免费的）
不过不用我搞的那个也行，XDJM们可以自己动手丰衣足食。毕竟拥抱未来才是正确的出路。
这里给一个攻略，简单来说，就是需要先在open ai的官网上注册账号，然后就可以直接使用chatgpt了。open ai的官网用谷歌搜一下就出来了，百度的话可能会被广告淹没。啥，不能用谷歌？额。。。那你可能用不了。。。如果不会科学上网的话。
注册账号后，就可以到这样的页面
然后就可以在对话框里告诉他，你要润色一篇文章了。
你可以这样问：请帮我用英文润色一下这篇文章：XXXXXXXX。
然后坐等结果，基本上分分钟就给你搞定。我看了一下，跟以前自己申请的时候找的机构润色的比，似乎还好一点。
放在grammarly里面测一下得分。原始文章55分，润色后能到94分，惊奇。我用机构润色的文章丢进去也只有86分。（可能人工智能看在都是AI的份上胳膊肘往内？）
所以别问哪里机构润色好了，有免费又好用的工具为啥不用呢？也别被网上的骗子骗了，我算是100块交个学费，打破信息差。只要会科学上网，稍微动动手指，什么都有了。
历史原帖：
闲来无事，逛闲鱼看到的，震惊现在写文书已经门槛这么低了么，100能干啥？出于好奇的心态，拍了一个。搞了一些基本信息，胡诌了一些经历，看看能写出来什么东西。
来来来，一起欣赏一下，就当100块丢水里听个响。
背景信息：双非财经一本，GPA3.83/5，雅思7.5，GMAT690，acca全科通过，实习：安永税务咨询/德勤财务咨询/中信证券投行部。推荐信情况如下：四大会计师事务所的推荐信，中信证券director推荐信，奖学金若干，小奖若干，社团活动领导力活动志愿者活动若干。我的重要经历1是开发了一套量化交易系统帮助我们券商投行部业绩做到了行业第一。此外我的重要经历2是我还在2021年参与过国际基金组织的会议并代表中国发表演讲。申BC的MSF。
Dear Admissions Committee, I am writing to express my strong interest in the Master of Finance program at Boston College. With a strong academic background and a passion for finance, I am confident that this program will help me achieve my career goals and become a leader in the finance industry. Growing up, I was always fascinated by the intricacies of finance and the impact it has on the world. This passion led me to pursue a degree in finance and accounting, where I excelled academically with a GPA of 3.83 out of 5. Additionally, I have passed all subjects of ACCA and obtained a score of 690 on the GMAT. My language proficiency, as demonstrated by a score of 7.5 on IELTS, will further enhance my ability to succeed in a global program. My professional experiences have also prepared me well for the Master of Finance program. I have interned at three well-respected firms, including EY Tax Consulting, Deloitte Financial Consulting, and CITIC Securities Investment Banking, where I was able to apply my knowledge and develop my skills in finance. One of my proudest accomplishments was when I developed a quantitive trading system that helped our investment banking division achieve first place in the industry. Another important experience was representing China at an international conference hosted by the International Monetary Fund in 2021. This opportunity allowed me to develop my public speaking skills and network with professionals from all over the world. These experiences have given me a well-rounded understanding of the finance industry and have prepared me for the challenges I will face in the Master of Finance program. Following graduation from Boston College, my short-term goal is to work for a top investment bank, where I can continue to hone my skills and gain practical experience. In the long-term, I hope to become a leader in the finance industry, using my knowledge and expertise to help companies make informed financial decisions. I am confident that the Master of Finance program at Boston College will provide me with the skills and knowledge I need to achieve these goals. The program's focus on finance and accounting, as well as its reputation for producing highly-skilled professionals, make it the perfect fit for me. Additionally, the opportunities to network with alumni and participate in practical projects will provide me with the experience I need to succeed in the industry. However, I am aware that the journey to achieving my goals will not be easy. I know that I will face challenges along the way, such as adapting to a new environment, balancing coursework and professional responsibilities, and competing with my peers. However, I am confident that I have the drive and determination to overcome these challenges and achieve my goals. In conclusion, I am eager to join the Master of Finance program at Boston College and am confident that I am the right fit for the program. My academic background, professional experiences, and passion for finance make me a strong candidate for the program. I look forward to the opportunity to continue my education at Boston College and to contribute to the finance community. Thank you for considering my application. Sincerely, Jie Zhang
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