【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day26（prep07开始）

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1.(1)To meet the rapidly rising market demand for fish and seafood, suppliers are growing fish twice as fast as their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment by nearly half and raising them on special diets.
(A) their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment
(B) their natural growth rate, their feed allotment cut
(C) growing them naturally, cutting their feed allotment
(D) they grow naturally, cutting their feed allotment
(E) they grow naturally, with their feed allotment cut  A

2.(2)Organized in 1966 by the Fish and Wildlife Service, the Breeding Bird Survey uses annual roadside counts along established routes for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of more than 250 bird species, including 180 songbirds.
(A) for monitoring of population changes of as many as, or of
(B) to monitor population changes of as many, or
(C) to monitor changes in the populations of
(D) that monitors population changes of
(E) that monitors changes in populations of as many as, or
D

3.(3)Less than 35 years after the release of African honeybees outside Sao Paulo, Brazil, their descendants, popularly known as killer bees, had migrated as far north as southern Texas.
(A) Less than 35 years after the release of African honeybees outside Sao Paulo, Brazil,
(B) In less than 35 years since releasing African honeybees outside Sao Paulo, Brazil,
(C) In less than the 35 years since African honeybees had been released outside Sao Paulo, Brazil,
(D) It took less than 35 years from the release of African honeybees outside Sao Paulo, Brazil, when
(E) It took less than the 35 years after the time that African honeybees were released outside Sao Paulo, Brazil, and then  
A

4.(4)Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternating current, because he was excited with the prospects of harnessing niagra falls for producing electric power,he predicted in the mid-1890's that electricity generated at Niagara would one day power the streetcars of London and the streetlights of Paris.
(A) Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternating current, because he was excited with the prospects of harnessing Niagara Falls for producing electric power, he
(B) The prospects of harnessing Niagara Falls to produce electric power was exciting to Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternating current, and so he
(C) Excited about the prospects of harnessing Niagara Falls to produce electric power, Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternating current,
(D) Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternating current, excited about the prospects of harnessing Niagara Falls for the production of electric power and
(E) The inventor of alternating current, excited with the prospects of harnessing Niagara Falls for producing of electric power, Nikola Tesla  
D

5.(5)The airline company, following through on recent warnings that it might start reducing service, announced that it was eliminating jet service to nine cities, closing some unneeded operations, and it grounded twenty-two planes.
(A) closing some unneeded operations, and it grounded
(B) closing some unneeded operations, and grounding
(C) was closing some unneeded operations, while it grounded
(D) it closed some unneeded operations and grounded
(E) it was closing some unneeded operations, and grounding
B

6.(6)The list of animals that exhibits a preference of either using the right or the left hand (i.e., claw, paw, or foot) has been expanded to include the lower vertebrates.
(A) exhibits a preference of either using the right or the left hand (i.e., claw, paw, or foot) has been expanded to include
(B) exhibits the preference to use either the right or the left hand (i.e., claw, paw, or foot) has been expanded and includes
(C) exhibit a preference in either using the right or the left hand (i.e., claw, paw, or foot) has been expanded to include
(D) exhibit a preference for using either the right or the left hand (i.e., claw, paw, or foot) has been expanded to include
(E) exhibit the preference as to either using the right or the left hand (i.e., claw, paw, or foot) has been expanded and includes  
B

7.(7)Obtaining an investment-grade rating will keep the county's future borrowing costs low, protect its already-tattered image, and increase its ability to buy bond insurance.
(A) Obtaining an investment-grade rating will keep the county's future borrowing costs low, protect
(B) To obtain an investment-grade rating will keep the county's future borrowing costs low, and protect
(C) Having obtained an investment-grade rating will, in keeping the county's future borrowing costs low, protect
(D) To obtain an investment-grade rating would keep the county's future borrowing costs low, protecting
(E) Obtaining an investment-grade rating, keeping the county's borrowing costs low, would be protecting  
A

8.(8)The Achaemenid empire of Persia reached the Indus Valley in the fifth century B.C., bringing the Aramaic script with it, from which was derived both northern and southern Indian alphabets.
(A) the Aramaic script with it, from which was derived both northern and
(B) the Aramaic script with it, and from which deriving both the northern and the
(C) with it the Aramaic script, from which derive both the northern and the
(D) with it the Aramaic script, from which derives both northern and
(E) with it the Aramaic script, and deriving from it both the northern and
C  

9.(9)Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.
(A) Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
(B) Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress
(C) According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
(D) Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed
(E) Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing  
C

10.(10)Ancient hunter-gatherers developed instincts that stigmatized selfishness, and voluntary cooperation was encouraged as well, whether it be within the group or also with outsiders.
(A) selfishness, and voluntary cooperation was encouraged as well, whether it be within the group or
(B) selfishness, encouraging voluntary cooperation as well, both within the group but
(C) selfishness and also encouraging voluntary cooperation, within the group and
(D) selfishness and they encouraged voluntary cooperation, whether it be within the group or
(E) selfishness and encouraged voluntary cooperation, not only within the group but

A

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1.
答案：D
解析：
A.比较对象不对等，as...as结构前面是动作后面是名词，错误。
B.比较对象不对等，as...as结构前面是动作后面是名词，错误。
C.逻辑语义改变，错误，grow them naturally表示的意思是供应商自然地养殖鱼类，而原句想要表达的意思是鱼类在自然条件下的生长速度，况且鱼的自然生长不需要受到供应商的干预。
E.and前后动词形式不平行，错误。with的出现导致表意模糊（？？）。

2.
答案：C
解析：
A.表目的时，用to do比for doing更佳。or of有歧义，可以与monitoring of并列也可以与changes of并列。of as many as, or of more than的表达wordy且无意义（？）。B.as many的结构不完整（？），错误。
D.主谓不一致，错误。that就近修饰了routes，错误（？）。
E.主谓不一致，错误。that就近修饰了routes，错误（？）。as many as, or more than的表达wordy且无意义（？）。

3.
答案：A
解析：
A.正确，after + n.结构避免了逻辑主语有可能造成歧义的问题。
B.their descendants成为了releasing的逻辑主语，错误。since通常是现在完成时的标志。in+时间段，通常是将来时的标志词，放在这里有歧义，可能被误解为35年后才释放非洲蜜蜂。
C.过去完成时的时态错误，主句也是过去完成时，错误地表示两个事件同时发生，造成时态混乱。since通常是现在完成时的标志。in+时间段，通常是将来时的标志词，放在这里有歧义，可能被误解为35年后才释放非洲蜜蜂。。
D.it作形式主语，无指代，错误，it作形式主语时，通常用于指代不定式结构。when的使用会造成前后事件同时发生的歧义，错误。
E.it作形式主语，无指代，错误，it作形式主语时，通常用于指代不定式结构。after the time that的表达wordy。

4.
答案：C
解析：
A.because前面不是完整的句子结构，只是一个人名及其同位语，而在主句的句首又出现了主语he，导致主语重复（双主语），错误。
B.and前后的主语分别为prospects和he，不平行，在平行结构中，后面的代词应该是用于指代前面提到过的主语的，所以错误。
D.excited about...是插入语成分，and前面少谓语，导致句子结构不完整，错误。
E.excited前面少谓语，错误。但如果加上谓语也是错误的，因为逗号不能连接两个句子。主要的错误点应该是The inventor of...作为同位语成分，与其所要修饰的主语N T的距离过远，不优选。

5.
答案：B
解析：
ground表示“停飞”的意思。
A.grounded与announced并列，错误。正确的句意逻辑应该是eliminate...,closing...,and ground....应该是并列起来表示reduce service的具体措施。
C.while表示然而或当...时，导致逻辑语义改变，错误。
D.逗号连接了两个完整的句子，错误。
E.逗号连接了两个完整的句子，错误。

6.
答案：D
解析：
A.that修饰的是animals，所以exhibit的主谓不一致，错误。either...or...结构，前后不平行，错误。
B.that修饰的是animals，所以exhibit的主谓不一致，错误。原句是用to include表目的，这里变成了与expand的平行关系，逻辑语义改变，错误。
C.either...or...结构，前后不平行，错误。
E.either...or...结构，前后不平行，错误。原句是用to include表目的，这里变成了与expand的平行关系，逻辑语义改变，错误。

7.
答案：A
解析：
B.to obtain...，表目的，导致原逻辑语义改变，错误（？）。protect前面的and多余。
C.will, in keeping...句子不通awkward，还导致三个原本并列的三个动词不能平行，原逻辑语义被改变，错误。
D.protecting导致and前后的动词形式不平行，错误。to obtain...，表目的，导致原逻辑语义改变，错误（？）。
E.obtaining...和keep...变成了并列关系，导致原逻辑语义改变，错误。protecting导致and前后的动词形式不平行，错误。

8.
答案：C
解析：
A.主谓不一致，错误。后半句采用了倒装结构，其正常的语序应该是Both the northern and southern Indian alphabets were derived from Aramic script.
B.and前后的并列成分不平行，前面是主句，后面是定语从句，错误。
C.bring A with B 和bring with B A 表达的意思相同，正确。
D.主谓不一致，错误。后半句采用了倒装结构，其正常的语序应该是Both the northern and southern Indian alphabets were derived from Aramic script.  所以，derives错误。
E.deriving的逻辑主语变成了empire，错误，正确的主语应该是Aramic script。and前后的并列成分不平行，前面是完整句子，后面不是完整句子结构，错误。

9.
答案：D
解析：
A.and前后的结构不平行，未能构成indicate that...and...that...的结构，错误。Based on的逻辑主语变成了women自己，错误。robe that they used to dress a statue，有歧义，可以理解为过去常常用长袍装裹雕塑；也可以理解为长袍只是妇女们用于装裹雕塑过程中的一种工具，而不一定是把长袍穿在雕塑身上，逻辑语义改变，错误。
B.and前后的结构不平行，未能构成indicate that...and...that...的结构，错误。Based on的逻辑主语变成了women自己，错误。
C.and前后的结构不平行，未能构成indicate that...and...that...的结构，错误。robe that they used to dress a statue，有歧义，可以理解为过去常常用长袍装裹雕塑；也可以理解为长袍只是妇女们用于装裹雕塑过程中的一种工具，而不一定是把长袍穿在雕塑身上，逻辑语义改变，错误。
E.and前后的结构不平行，未能构成indicate that...and...that...的结构，错误。

10.
答案：E
解析：
A.and和as well的语义重复（redundancy）错误。wether...or...结构前后不平行（？）。or also连用错误（？）。
B.both应该与and搭配，缺少and，错误。
C.and前后的动词形式不平行，错误。and和also语义重复。wether...or...结构前后不平行，also多余（？）。
D.and前后主语相同，they可以省略，并且加上they会存在指代不明的问题。

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我的答案：DCACB DACCE
正确答案：DCACB DACDE
1.
Cutting 和 raising平行，排除B E
Twice as fast as 比较对象要能够比较，排除A C
2.
A 又有as many as 和more 等于是any number了
B 同A
D E that不对
3.
B since releasing没有动作的发出者不对
C
DE 错误
4.
A NT之后又有 because he不对
B 不简洁
D excited前面没有be动词
E 同位语the inventor距离太远
5.
三个ing并列平行
6.
that从句修饰animals用exhibit，排除AB
Either or平行，排除CE
7.
Keep，protect，and increase平行并列
排除BCDE
8.
which修饰的应该是script，排除AB
Both the northern and the southern derive from which，选C
9.❌
要注意看平行的内容具体是什么
两个that从句平行，排除BDE
不是women are based on，排除A
10.
A and 不平行
B both but错误
C stigmatized 和 encouraging 不平行，排除
D they 多余
E 正确