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Structure
Present a statement – porphyry copper formed due to special geological conditions.
Provide 5 reasons to support the argument.
Summarize
一个观点,五个论据, 重复观点。 总分总的文章结构。
Attitude
作者自然是赞成这个观点的
Content
Copper deposits originated from volcanic activity.
P1: Evidence suggests that copper deposits formed as lay products of volcanic activity where maga bodies had suitable compositions and properties and where crustal characteristics fit. Evidence is indirect, not perfect.
However, there are facts that supports that argument:
1. Copper deposits are found in volcanic active areas, where earthquake and volcanic activities are still common
2. Coincidence of copper and volcanic rocks in both time and space -There are deposits where remnants of volcanic rocks about the same age are found and where copper deposits are present in volcanic rocks (as intrusions) –
3. Formation process indicates that copper originated from volcano.
4. Appearance similarity – both contains breech (angular fragments of rock.
5. Copper deposits and volcanoes show similar tendencies to cluster for form along lines.
Conclusion: link between volcanism and the formation of copper deposit is important
1. It establishes a rational basis for searching for such deposits
2. High success rate attests to its validity
Words and Phrases
1. Foregoing – just mentioned or stated, preceding
2. Came into being
3. Evidence has now been accumulated that leads us to suspect that deposits were formed
4. Attest to
5. Premised
6. Moreover, the high success rate (– the discovery of more than a hundred new deposits-) /over the past two decades of searching (premised in part on the assumption that the theory is correct)/ attests in some measure to its validity.
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