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【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day11

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1.D
direct修饰contact
2.B
3.C
support of sb
4.D
5.E
due to相当于caused by
6.A
7.A
平行结构
8.D
9.D
10.D
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1-5 DAC
4. 除B选D 5. 去D选E (because of noun verbing ❌)
6-10 AADDD
错题2
疑惑题4
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2. A scrub jay can remember when it cached a particular piece of food in a particular place, researchers have discovered, and tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if stored long enough to have rotted.
A.tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if
B.they tend not to bother recovering a perishable treat
C.tending not to bother to recover a perishable treat it
D.tends not to bother recovering a perishable treat      
E.tends not bothering to recover a perishable treat it
错因:
提取主谓宾 tend的主语不是researchers 是A scrub jay
为什么提错,没有看懂原句意思,不知道scrub jay是一种鸟 所以没有理解句意啊
正确process
1. 读intended meaning,提取SVA
2. AR:and //,找tend的subject
2. SVA排除AB
3. //排除C
4. idiom 排除E,it也没有指代
4.
Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.
迷惑选项好想选.as much annually as is emitted by the
OA.that emitted annually by all         

Why B wrong
1. main point
is //
total amount of pollutant emitted (used as a modifier, not verb) annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much annually as is emitted by the motor vehicles…
Ron: the real problem is that "is" has no parallel in the first part of the comparison - i.e., the first part doesn't say "is emitted" or "are emitted" - and so the comparison is wrong.
2. redundancy
amount X is twice as much as amount Y --> inferior, and possibly even wrong (redundant)
amount X is twice amount Y --> undoubtedly better
3. annually的位置
the correct answer is structured like this:

the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at the O'hare International airport is twice that emitted annually by xxxxx

this actually makes sense.
each part is "the amount emitted annually by xxyyzz", and those two (similarly structured) parts are linked together by the "twice..." comparison.

__

choice B, on the other hand, is structured like this:

the total amount of pollutant emitted annually ... is twice as much annually as is emitted by xxxxx

this makes no sense.
since "annually" is already in the pink part -- the comparison -- it already applies to both parts.
so, the additional use of "annually" in the first blue part is redundant.  
also, the two blue parts aren't parallel -- one is expressed as an annual rate, and the other isn't.
Correct usage of twice — from Ron Purewal > <
there are three different kinds of acceptable uses of "twice":
1) twice NOUN/PRONOUN, where the noun or pronoun describes a numerical quantity of something;
2) twice as ADV/ADJ (as)... / twice this/that ADV/ADJ
3) twice by itself, meaning that something has happened two times (e.g., i've been there twice).

#3 is the only one of these constructions in which you might see "twice" followed by "of" -- and then only if they're independent constructions.
for instance, you could say
smith has already been advised twice of the foolishness of these actions.
... notice that this construction is NOT "twice of"; the "of" is part of the boldfaced construction, but the "twice" is not.

note that, in #1, there may be possessives and/or adjectives in front of the NOUN.
一些Q&A
Usage : X is twice that Y
this isn't a construction.
you're only going to have "twice that..." in one of the following 2 cases:
1) "that" is a relative pronoun (e.g., the unemployment rate of Country X is twice that of Country Y)
2) they're part of independent constructions (e.g., smith has already been advised twice that these actions are foolish)

1)Th total money i have is twice that you have.
incorrect -- this "that" is not a relative pronoun such as the one above.

2)The total money i have is twice of what you have.
3)the total money i have is twice of that you have.
both incorrect -- "twice of X" is never correct as a single construction.

4)the total money i have is twice as much as you have.
"twice as much as you have" is ok.
"total money" isn't, though; you'd have to say "the amount of money" or "the total amount of money".

5)the total money i have is double of what you have.
incorrect -- the correct construction is "double X", not "double of X".



6)The number of books i have are twice that you have.
incorrect, same reason as #1
also, note that "the number ... are ..." is incorrect in all of these sentences; "the number" is singular, so the verb should be "is".

7)The number of books i have are twice as many as you have.
"twice as many as ..." is a correct construction.
you can't say "the number is twice as many", though -- that's a redundant construction.
you'd just say "i have twice as many books as you have."

8)the number of books i have are twice of as many as you have
wrong. can't have "twice of X".
——
"Twice that you have" doesn't work.

Consider the following examples, each of which could be the second half of a comparison:
...twice the amount that you have
...twice the quantity that you have

etc.

With "that" (= pronoun) in there, you'd need ...twice that that you have. That's absolutely unreadable, of course, so you'll never see it.
发表于 2022-10-8 16:13:25 | 显示全部楼层
Day11
1.(199)The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have _contact with it directly with_ an ichana (dream) experience.
A.contact with it directly with
It指代不清
B.direct contact with it by way of
It指代不清
C.contact with the last directly through
Last是三个实物比较? contact w/ xx directly不如direct contact?
D.direct contact with the latter by means of     
选D
E.contact directly with the mystical level due to
不是with the mystical level 是 level of reality

2.(200)A scrub jay can remember when it cached a particular piece of food in a particular place, researchers have discovered, and _tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if_ stored long enough to have rotted.
A.tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if
tend错,a bird要加s
B.they tend not to bother recovering a perishable treat
they错
C.tending not to bother to recover a perishable treat it
tending错
D.tends not to bother recovering a perishable treat
选D      
E.tends not bothering to recover a perishable treat it
倾向不困扰?

3.(201)The three women, liberal activists who strongly support legislation in favor of civil rights and environmental protection, _have consistently received labor's unqualifying support_.  
A.have consistently received labor's unqualifying support
B.are consistently receiving the unqualifying support of labor
和句意有点偏差?
C.have consistently received the unqualified support of labor
D.receive consistent and unqualified support by labor     
E.are receiving consistent and unqualified support by labor
选A?

4.(202)Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice _as much as that which is being emitted annually by all_ motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.
A.as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
That which is ?但是emitted annually最工整
B.as much annually as is emitted by the
by the,排除
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
选C?
D.that emitted annually by all     
比较级可以省略as吗?   
E.that emitted annually compared to the
the 排除

5.(203)In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair _due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing_ and fungus was growing on the walls.
A.due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
选A
B.due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
C.because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize
D.because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize      
E.because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing
within them 指代不清

6.(204)The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” _a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a_ new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A.a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
since+特定年份, 选A?
B.a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
chemistry跟学科吗
C.a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
D.critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of         
E.critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
选E?his会不会指代不清

7.(205)The commission’s office of compliance, inspections, and investigations plans _to intensify its scrutiny of stock analysts to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are_ paid for their work by a firm’s investment banking division.
A. to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are
选A?
B. to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or they are
C. to not only investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are
D.not only to investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are     
E.not only to investigate whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when

8.(206)While studying the genetic makeup of corn, _a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led_ to greater understanding of cell differentiation.
A.a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led
B.a new class of mutant genes in corn were discovered by Barbara McClintock, leading
C.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, and it led
D.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, a discovery that led   
选D
E.Barbara McClintock, who discovered a new class of mutant genes, leading

9.(207)Unlike _the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries_, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.
A.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,
B.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,
C.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries,
D.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,  
选D,space station 和shuttle/spacecraft对比而不是和flight对比         
E.the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,

10.(208)Scientists who studied the famous gold field known as Serra Pelada concluded that the rich lode was _not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years_ concentrated the gold from jungle soils and rivers and rocks.
A.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years
B.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but instead swarms of microbes over millions of years that
but instead重复
C.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but swarms of microbes over millions of years that
选C?
D.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but by swarms of microbes that over millions of years         
E.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years
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Day 11
1. D
    知识点: direct contact—通过ichaha 来直接接触
                  Directly with 只通过ichaha 来接触
A. It指代不清,⬆️❌
B. It指代不清❌
C. 表达后面一个要用latter 而不是last❌
D. ✅
E. Due to 不合理

2. And 之后的句子应该和can remember 平行,tend 三单,排除ABC❌
         D.✅
         E. Tend to do sth

3. Unqualifying adj. 没有资格的
        Unqualified adj. 无条件的
        排除AB❌
        Consistently 修饰received, 排除DE❌
        C✅

4. D
        A. 累赘❌
        B. 修饰错误❌
        C. Twice 和compared to 混合使用❌
        D. ✅
        E. Compared to 重复

5. E
        A. Its 指代不明❌
        B. Its 指代不明❌
        C. Would crystallize 不与fungus was growing 平行❌
        D. Raising 修饰不明
        E.✅

6. A
        B. Critique 和his envisioning 不平行,his 指代不清❌
        C. and 前后不平行?
        D. And 前后不平行,forward…also累赘❌
        E. As well as前后不平行,his 指代不清❌

7. A
        Not only….but also 平行结构—排除BCDE❌

8. D
        While studying 壮语从句省略在句首,studying 的逻辑主语即为句子主语,所以主语应该是人。 排除AB❌
        C. It 指代不清❌
        D. ✅
        E. To greater understanding 的主语应该是这个发现❌

9. D
        句子的主语是a permanently orbiting space station, 所以unlike 后接的东西应与space station 相似,即shuttle and spacecraft ,排除ACE❌
         B. Sufficient 和enough 重复,with 修饰有歧义,也可以修饰space station❌

10. D
        Not….but…..平行结构考察,排除ABCE ❌
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