【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day11

肥宅二号

Day 11
1. D 考点人称指代 修饰
AB的it指代不清，排掉
C directly 修饰的是through，但本质上应该修饰contact，改变意思了
E 的due to用caused by replace会发现语义有误
补充：directly的修饰问题在A/E中也出现了，可以修饰through或者contact

2. D 考点主谓一致　平行 固定搭配
主语是a scrub jay，因此应该是单数，排除AB
平行的两个元素应该是can remember和tends (not) to do something因此排掉C
tends to do something因此应该是Ｄ
补充bother的固定搭配：
(not) bother to do something
(not) bother about/with
(not) bother doing something

3. C 考点时态　修饰　diciton
A的labor's不优但不是绝对错误　这里用ｏｆ结构更好
进行时不算错误，但不太优吧，时态改变了
补充读书笔记：
unqualifying - 使某人没有资格
unqualified - 没有资格的
因此这里用unqualified才是严谨的
排掉A/B
D的consistent变成了修饰support句意改变了
E的错误同D　因此应该选C

4. D 考点比较　固定搭配
这道题考研的是量词的比较型
A as much as that which指代词重复了
B 比较的固定搭配错误了，这里应该用as much (形容词）ａｓ
CE的compared to 搭配错误了，C是搭配错误，E的compared冗余

5.E 考点 rhetorical construction 修饰　人称
A which 修饰游客，语义错误排掉　its人称指代错误，主语是复数
B closed to visitor thereby raising是错误的表达　
C moisture不是关闭的原因，而是呼出的气体提升了湿度，因此语义还是不准确
D because of moisture，后面的修饰变成了次级重点　这里还是错
E表达清晰　

6.　A 考点rhetorical construction 平行
这里是一个同位语结构
B and also冗余，　envisioning的用词也不够简洁，也不平行(补充：ｈｉｓ指代不清）
C envisioning同B and as well搭配错误
D critiquing 和a vision不平行
E critiquing 和his envisioning of 不平行

7.　A 考点平行
whether 对whether可以排掉B/C
D whether or not固定搭配错误
第二个平行考点　not only but also，E的结构是不平行的

8.　D　考点grammatical construction
while studying... 后面应该紧跟一个动作发出者的主语，因此AB都是错误的
C用ａｎｄ连接不优，并且ｉｔ指代不清
E没有谓语，后面都是修饰成分　sentence fragment

9. 错选B　考点比较　修饰
which 就近修饰排除了ACD 错误，不是都是错误的
A的比较对象不对等，short flights vs. space station，应该是两个宇宙飞船对比
B with sufficient enough power有歧义！可以修饰前后两个名词
C 错误同A
E whose只能指代人，使用错误


10.　D 考点平行
正确结构应该是not by...but by...
只有D是复合的

Ranyo

Day11
1.(199)The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A.contact with it directly with
B.direct contact with it by way of
C.contact with the last directly through
D.direct contact with the latter by means of     
E.contact directly with the mystical level due to

E*
AB的it指代不清。C的the last不对，应该是the latter；through是间接的，与directly不符。D的by means of好像有点redundant
这道题选择D。E的due to不对，due to可以替换成caused by，但其实an ichana experience只是手段，而非原因。by means of可以，也可以替换成by way of。

2.(200)A scrub jay can remember when it cached a particular piece of food in a particular place, researchers have discovered, and tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if stored long enough to have rotted.
A.tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if
B.they tend not to bother recovering a perishable treat
C.tending not to bother to recover a perishable treat it
D.tends not to bother recovering a perishable treat      
E.tends not bothering to recover a perishable treat it

D*
首先不可以是两个句子放在一句话里，排除B。and后面不可以加tending表修饰，排除C。应该是tends，排除A。
E的tend not doing不对，it指代不清。选择D。

3.(201)The three women, liberal activists who strongly support legislation in favor of civil rights and environmental protection, have consistently received labor's unqualifying support.  
A.have consistently received labor's unqualifying support
B.are consistently receiving the unqualifying support of labor
C.have consistently received the unqualified support of labor
D.receive consistent and unqualified support by labor     
E.are receiving consistent and unqualified support by labor

C*
unqualified support，无条件支持。排除AB。DE不应该把consistent当作形容词，也不应该是by labor 而是from labor。

4.(202)Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.
A.as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
B.as much annually as is emitted by the
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
D.that emitted annually by all         
E.that emitted annually compared to the

D*
有compared to的时候不可以出现表示比较的词，排除CE。
A的is being emitted不对。BD之间纠结，觉得D更好。
Ron说：B的错误在于is没有可以平行的成分，所以这个比较是错误的。


5.(203)In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.
A.due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
B.due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
C.because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize
D.because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize      
E.because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing

E*
先排除AB，its不对，不对应前面的the chambers。
D的so as to用得不对，so as to如果要用应该是表状态，而非动作。Because of放在句首，后面要有句子，不能直接说什么什么because of什么。due to永远可以换成caused by。
C读起来怪怪的，没有E解释得合理。

6.(204)The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A.a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B.a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C.a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
D.critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of         
E.critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of

A* 平行。
B的his指代不清。C不平行。
DE不平行。

7.(205)The commission’s office of compliance, inspections, and investigations plans to intensify its scrutiny of stock analysts to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are paid for their work by a firm’s investment banking division.
A.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are
B.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or they are
C.to not only investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are
D.not only to investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are     
E.not only to investigate whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when

A* 完美的平行。
B的if不对。C没有成分与investigate平行。DE和C一样，都不平行。
另外注意：如果直接出现whether or not，是redundant的错误；但是如果表状态，whether he comes or not，可以。

8.(206)While studying the genetic makeup of corn, a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led to greater understanding of cell differentiation.
A.a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led
B.a new class of mutant genes in corn were discovered by Barbara McClintock, leading
C.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, and it led
D.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, a discovery that led   
E.Barbara McClintock, who discovered a new class of mutant genes, leading

D*
首先进行studying的是人，排除AB。
不可以用and连接两个有主语的句子，排除C。
E缺少主语。

9.(207)Unlike the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.
A.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,
B.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,
C.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries,
D.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,           
E.the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,

D*
比较对象并非short flights，而是shuttle and earlier spacecraft。排除ACE。
B的with不知道是在说s&es还是poss，排除；最重要的错误是redundant，sufficient和enough在一起不对。选择D。

10.(208)Scientists who studied the famous gold field known as Serra Pelada concluded that the rich lode was not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years concentrated the gold from jungle soils and rivers and rocks.
A.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years
B.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but instead swarms of microbes over millions of years that
C.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but swarms of microbes over millions of years that
D.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but by swarms of microbes that over millions of years         
E.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years

D* 完美平行。ABCE都不平行。

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Fox的Dream

Day11
1.(199)The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have contact with it directly with an ichana (dream) experience.
A.contact with it directly with
B.direct contact with it by way of
C.contact with the last directly through
D.direct contact with the latter by means of     
E.contact directly with the mystical level due to

2.(200)A scrub jay can remember when it cached a particular piece of food in a particular place, researchers have discovered, and tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if stored long enough to have rotted.
A.tend not to bother to recover a perishable treat if
B.they tend not to bother recovering a perishable treat
C.tending not to bother to recover a perishable treat it
D.tends not to bother recovering a perishable treat      
E.tends not bothering to recover a perishable treat it

3.(201)The three women, liberal activists who strongly support legislation in favor of civil rights and environmental protection, have consistently received labor's unqualifying support.  
A.have consistently received labor's unqualifying support
B.are consistently receiving the unqualifying support of labor
C.have consistently received the unqualified support of labor
D.receive consistent and unqualified support by labor     
E.are receiving consistent and unqualified support by labor

4.(202)Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O’Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.
A.as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
B.as much annually as is emitted by the
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
D.that emitted annually by all         
E.that emitted annually compared to the

5.(203)In late 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza were closed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.
A.due to moisture exhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
B.due to moisture that tourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that salt from the stone would crystallize
C.because tourists were exhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels such that salt from the stone would crystallize
D.because of moisture that was exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high as to make the salt from the stone crystallize      
E.because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing

6.(204)The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
A.a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
B.a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
C.a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
D.critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of         
E.critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of

7.(205)The commission’s office of compliance, inspections, and investigations plans to intensify its scrutiny of stock analysts to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are paid for their work by a firm’s investment banking division.
A.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when they are考平行,排除BCDE
B.to investigate not only whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or they are
C.to not only investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also if conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are
D.not only to investigate whether or not research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or are     E.not only to investigate whether research is an independent function at brokerage firms, but also whether conflicts result when analysts own the stocks they write about or when

8.(206)While studying the genetic makeup of corn, a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led to greater understanding of cell differentiation.
A.a new class of mutant genes was discovered by Barbara McClintock, a discovery which led
B.a new class of mutant genes in corn were discovered by Barbara McClintock, leading
C.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, and it led
D.Barbara McClintock discovered a new class of mutant genes, a discovery that led   
E.Barbara McClintock, who discovered a new class of mutant genes, leading

9.(207)Unlike the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.
A.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,
B.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,
C.the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries,
D.the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights,
与a permanentlyorbitting space station平行，排除ACE；B redundancy.          
E.the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries,

10.(208)Scientists who studied the famous gold field known as Serra Pelada concluded that the rich lode was not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years concentrated the gold from jungle soils and rivers and rocks.
A.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years
B.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but instead swarms of microbes over millions of years that
C.not produced by the accepted methods of ore formation but swarms of microbes over millions of years that
D.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but by swarms of microbes that over millions of years         
E.produced not by the accepted methods of ore formation but that swarms of microbes over millions of years