【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day10

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1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid
B.forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
C.having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid
D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them     
E.that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid
1. D. to build…to form…to lay

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it
2. D 要和划线句后面的caused保持平行

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.
A.which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning
B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn     
C.which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn
D.removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning      
E.removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn
3. D. either or

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Day10
1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid （the forming 应该用forming或to form；and前后不平行，被动没必要）
B.forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them（and前后不平行）
C.having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid（having表达method不简洁；and前后不平行，被动没必要）
D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them ✅
E.that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid（被动没必要；and前后不平行，；which距离修饰的bricks太远）

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also（前面有did，gave应该为give；前后为转折关系，不应该用not only，but also）
B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also（前面倒装，后面but also应该要有主语；前后为转折关系，不应该用not only，but also）
C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also（but前没有谓语）
D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  ✅
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it（but前没有谓语；前后为转折关系，不应该用not only，but ）

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.
A.which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning（either和as well as搭配错误；burning和后面的do not不平行）
B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn     ✅
C.which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn （either和along with搭配错误）
D.removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning （burning和后面的do not不平行）
E.removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn （either和as well as搭配错误）

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1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
D
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid（砖块的形成？）
B.forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
C.having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid（主动比被动好 且having bricks很奇怪 ）
D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them     （前后更统一）
E.that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid   （which就近修饰）

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
D
疑惑：not only…but（also）是哪个能省略来着 but also中间可以加东西吗
A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also（create时态）
B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also（不平行? not only… but also did it caused  create时态）
C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also （but also前面没句子 ）
D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it（不平行）

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.
B
A.which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning ( either…or…)
B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn   
C.which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn ( either…or…)
D.removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning    (removing修饰谁的)
E.removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn ( either…or…)

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1.        D 1’18’’
a.        此部分描述方法，不宜用被动语态；they指代不明
b.         Forming和to lay不一致
c.        同a
d.        Correct
e.        同a；were laid时态错误；which指代错误

2.        D (B) 2’25’’
a.        gave时态错误
b.        which从句导致逻辑变动
c.        缺少谓语
d.        correct
e.        结构缺少also【错误的，该结构没有also也可以】；Giving 修饰 created,改变了逻辑

3.        D 55’’【错误，选B】
a.        either … or … 结构错误
b.         correct；
c.        同a
d.         没有关注划线部分上下文：Burning和denude不平行
e.        同a

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1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar. D
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid--拿掉after修饰语，and不平行
B.forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them ---拿掉after修饰语，and不平行
C.having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid—前面已经有现完
D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them  
E.that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid---宾语从句多余，which指代错误

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions. D
A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also –it破坏but also结构
B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also—which指代错
C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also---原谓语降级为修饰，but also表示对比没有同等的比较对象
D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  ---单独but also表示对比，带来好处，也带来坏处
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it--- not only…but结构不平行

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest. B
A.which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning—either or
B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn 用定从修饰前名词
C.which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn—either or
D.removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning  --伴随状语不符合句意，往后看！还有一个but平行，需要和denude平行，也可以排除
E.removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn—either or