【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day10

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1.D (平行，时态，语意逻辑）
2.D(Not any but also的用法/修饰语）
3.B (语言逻辑，either or的idiom）

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1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid
B.forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
C.having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid
D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them     
E.that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid
答案：D
And 前后对称，排除A B C
Which修饰clay，排除E

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it
答案：D
Not only …but also…表示递进关系，不恰当，排除A B C E

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.
A.which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning
B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn     
C.which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn
D.removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning      
E.removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn
答案：D
Either…or…搭配，排除A C E；对称排除B

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Day10
1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid（the forming of bricks out of mud or clay和they are laid不在同一逻辑层次）
B.forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them（forming and to lay形式不平行）
C.having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid（having bricks formed from mud or clay和they were laid不在同一逻辑层次）
D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
E.that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid（句意表达有问题，首先原句意是想表达最常见的方法是用mud or clay制作bricks,然后再把brisks放到wall里。但是这里变成砖头是由mud or clay形成的；其次，which的跳跃修饰也有问题，were formed from mud or clay和bricks不是一个意群，which也不是后置定语，因为有from mud or clay，所以which无法跨越谓语动词指向bricks；were的时态和there are也不搭）
答案：D
Intended meaning：有很多使用mud or clay来建solid walls的方法，最常见的方法是...后面应该说的这个方法是什么，最好是完整的一个句子
从意思来判断the forming of bricks out of mud or clay和they are laid in the wall in mud mortar应该是同一逻辑层次，即这两个都是“最常见的方法”中要说明的东西，因此名词和句子“they are...”平行一定是错的
tip：
搭配： (1) Aim, goal, intention, objective, function, way, method, purpose + be + to do 当然最常用的还是method of doing/for doing (2) Use, cite, function, regard, think/conceive of, view, act + as (3) Consider, deem, make, call, find, elect+宾语+宾补

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also（not only的逻辑关系错误；give 和 create 是 and 连接的两个并列成分，而时态已经被 did 提前，只能用原形，所以这里 gave 错）
B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also（not only的逻辑关系错误；Which 定语从句修饰 farmland，逻辑意义错误，是 systematic clearing 给了 consumers houses and furniture，不是 farmland；另外not only和but also是两个句子平行，but also后面不是句子）
C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also（But also 之前分句缺谓语）
D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it（not only的逻辑关系错误；but 后面是句子，前面not only后面不是，两个不平行）
答案：D
Intended meaning: 事件1：the systematic clearing of forests in the United States creates farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture 事件2：the systematic clearing of forests in the United States caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions
事件1和事件2一个好一个坏，因此是转折关系，而非递进关系，因此用not only的都错

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.
A.which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning（either...or...;,ing只做状语）
B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn     
C.which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn（either...or...）
D.removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning （either...or...）
E.removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn（either...or...;,ing只做状语）
答案：B

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【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day10

1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid

D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them   正确答案  

本题主考平行；several ways可以与there be搭配；A method is to do X and to do Y常见搭配；and后面加上逗号的表达并不常见，从本题可见GMAT接受这样的用法(prep1-247也出现类似用法)

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.

D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  正确答案
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it

D. Correct；But it also 转折前后句，说明systematic clearing 既带来了好东西，也带了坏东西，also 的使用，精妙。
E. Giving 修饰created,改变了原来的句意：并列的两个动作；Not only…but…也可以
：not only did sb do sth, but sb also did sth

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.

B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn     

either … or的平行，removes和burn的平行。