【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day10

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肥宅二号

Day 10
1. D 考点平行
A the forming 和they are laid不平行，they无所指代
B the forming和to lay不平行
C they were laid时态有误
E THAT从句和were laid不平行 were laid时态 WHICH就近指代clay错误

2. D 考点平行 rhetorical construction
结构考的是not only...but also但这个完整结构用在这里语义是不太优的，逻辑性欠缺，靠这个点就可以排除A/B
C的主语后面没有动词，接从句属于是sentence fragment
E的not only不仅给予了，但导致了，语义逻辑不通顺 错误

3. B 考点平行 固定搭配
考点是either or的搭配
因此这里排掉as well as的A和E，C的along with也不对 排除
D removing从句修饰has not addressed这里语义逻辑错误了 这里好像没有问题，读书笔记里的注解是burning和denude不平行，还是要注意未划线句子的结构！

Ranyo

Day10
1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid
B.forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
C.having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid
D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them     
E.that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid

D* 很完美的平行结构。
A的they are lied不对，方法不是they are lied.
B前后不对称。C和A错误一样，而且having bricks formed好奇怪。
E which用法不对，越位修饰勉强说得通，但后面不应该加逗号。（但是Ron说GMAT不考标点符号。E的错误在于which不知道修饰啥，以及最明显的错误，that bricks were的时态不对，过去时doesn’t make sense）

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it

D*
A的gave时态不对。
B的which修饰farmland，但语意不通。
C前面的句子缺少动词。
E giving修饰有误。

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.
A.which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning
B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn     
C.which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn
D.removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning      
E.removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn

A*
这句话的意思是说clear-cut和burn是两种logging方式，A makes sense.
B的意思是remove surface fires，语意不通。
C的意思是说用火来移除selected trees？好像不符合句子意思。
DE的ing修饰好像是说用removing的行为没有解决任何一种logging问题。然而并不是这个意思。

我真的会谢，这道题选B。either or结构。总是错一些很基本的结构，总是理解错句子意思，哎。还在想burn归类于logging很强行解释，原来是我理解错了。如果用either…or…来理解这道题瞬间就通顺了。选B！！！

Fox的Dream

Day10
1.（196）There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
A.the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid
B.forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
C.having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid
D.to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them     
E.that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid

2.（197）Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
A.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
B.Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but alsowhich修饰farmland语意不通
C.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
D.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  
E.The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it

3.（198）Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.
A.which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning
B.which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn     
C.which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn
D.removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning
“，-ing”形式adv modifier, 修饰动词，不是logging/ fires      
E.removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn