【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day8

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言言不吃盐

1. A
2. E
3. E
冒号后面是独立句子更优，排除BC；with结构不优，排除AD；

秋桂红

A
B
D 错在没掌握with的用法

盐盐小羊

1.A
主谓一致，划线后its排除BCD
E的while奇怪

2.E【B✔️】
选错*
划线句子后修饰对象应该是一个具体名词，排除AD
such要在前面有相关提及才可以用，排除CE

3.E
thesis—>consumers做的一件事，而非consumers本身，排除ABC
D冗余

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Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter【正确】
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters【being多余；没有谓语动词】
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters【all had written charters与后面的its不搭】【some that formed结构中some在定语从句中做主语，主动行使form动作错误】
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter【some应该是起同位语作用，但是加入with就变成了状语，错误；所有13各殖民地用一个宪章，也是有点奇怪】   
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter【with引导状语，错误；some，others应该是并列的，while引导的从句不完整，错误】

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,【后面的known as the subprime lending market没有合适的修饰名词；前面的their多余】
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group【正确】
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group【with引导状语，修饰动作pay back，lend都不合适】
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time, 【后面的known as the subprime lending market没有合适的修饰名词】
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group【such应该指代前文已出现的，所以多余】

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having【with引导状语修饰publish错误，应该是描述书的性质】
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having【主题的核心是消费者，错误】
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having【主题的核心是消费者；where使用错误，不是引导地点】
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have【with引导状语修饰publish错误，应该是描述书的性质】
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have【正确】

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        1. A 1'13''
                a. correct
                b. 句子成分缺失
                c. 不平行
                form主动错误
                d. 'all'和'a charter'数量不一致
                with的存在使得some并不是指代colonies，而是与colonies相关的东西
                e. while"必须与从句或__ing短语连用。它不能用于不包含任何动词形式的结构
        2. B 1'41''
                a. their not paying多余
                b. correct
                c. a group应该是borrowers的同位语，逻辑不对
                With引导独立主格，其逻辑主语为it（指代company），逻辑不合理；such无所指，
                错误且多余。
                d. 没有指代词的情况下后半句修饰语离proven records最近
                定语从句在这里表达不简洁地道
                e.  “such a group”是错误的，因为句子的开
                头没有“group”这个词
        3. E 1'19''
                a. with会使人误解thesis和前面的刊物独立
                b.  thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.，而并不是”sb做某事
                c. 先行词where不恰当
                d. 同a
                e. correct