OG-2016-44 关于平行 求大佬解释

selenaslay

According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a 'soft landing', followed by a gradual increase in the business activity.

(A) that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come

(B) in the economy to avoid the recession, what many feared earlier in the year, rather to come

(C) in the economy's ability to avoid the recession, something earlier in the year many had feared , and instead to come

(D) in the economy to avoid the recession many were fearing earlier in the year, and rather to come

(E) that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared earlier this year by many, with it instead coming


正确答案是A  
我找了一些解释，但是不能说服自己。BE我可以排除，但是关于CD，为什么说and instead/rather to come是不平行的呢？ 可以理解为和to avoid平行吧？或者有其他排除CD 的原因吗？

selenaslay

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LYY1201

问题的解答已经在这里啦，请戳：
https://gmat.la/question/OG2016-SC-44/discussion/47928

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selenaslay

LYY1201 发表于 2020-7-20 14:31
问题的解答已经在这里啦，请戳：
https://gmat.la/question/OG2016-SC-44/discussion/47928

谢谢！

ST5

这题确实有点tricky。希望有牛人来解答。不过我倒是排除了something earlier in the year many had feared （B，这种dangling的用法似乎不常见）和 many were fearing earlier in the year （C，这个从句用法有错误）。不知道我理解的这两个是否是hi错误。.....noun, somethingt many feared....，这种语法上有问题吗/或者是不是GMAC prefer？

Juno_Dai

B C D非常好排除。 后面接的不是that从句的统统排除，看都不带看的。只要接的不是that从句做同位语说明人们的信心是具体什么什么就不对。因为语义是想说人们的信心是具体经济怎么怎么样的信息，也不是对经济的信心——也就是B C D选项的表达

白小胖

个人认为迅速排除的方法：
(B) in the economy to avoid the recession, what many feared earlier in the year, rather to come
无法理解confidence XXX to avoid XX的说法，后面不够简洁
(C) in the economy's ability to avoid the recession, something earlier in the year many had feared , and instead to come
尽量避免无生命体使用's的表达，在严格书面语中不太严谨，something也应尽量避免
(D) in the economy to avoid the recession many were fearing earlier in the year, and rather to come
同B，加之看不到使用过去进行时的理由。earlier in the year模糊时间点不应该用一般过去时吗？

只不过是一分钟之内的判断，个人拙见，欢迎讨论

selenaslay

谢谢楼上大家的回复！
总结一下：
BD 都是confidence in the economy to avoid recession…… 这种结构在语义和逻辑上都不通，最好是用同位语从句来解释confidence的内容
C economy是没有生命的，economy's的用法不好，且something……这种dangling的修饰语不常见