我已经没有退路！只能考toefl,大家帮帮我！！

eyesy

18楼的Taurus，头像真是有个性啊！！而且分析够透彻，猫妹妹我自叹不如…………

wch2001_akuan

topic 36: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed poeple's lives. automobiles, bicycles, airplane, Use specific reasona and examples to support your answer.

At first, it seems very difficult for me to answer the statement since each one has changed people's lives very much. However, after serious consideration,  I think airplanes are the transportation that has changed people's lives most. In the following discussion, I will list reasons for the view.

The most important reason for my propensify for airplane is that it is very convenient. People can go to other distant places in a few hous. It  shortens the distance among countries. Nowadays, people can have a meeting in London afternoon, and have dinner with their family in Paris, that is unbelievable for people few centuries ago, because they traveled by sail and they must traveled several days.

Safety is another head reason that i have chosen to put there. According to some statistic, airplane is the safest transportation than any other vehicles like railroad. It is reported that the accident  ratio of airplanes is lower than that of trains and ships.

In addtion, it is very enjoyable to take a airplane. When you take a trip by an airplane,  you might cross different rivers,mountains even different continents and time zones. When you get off the airplane, you are in a place where people  say different language.

I can not deny that other transportations have changed our lives a lot, however, based on the reasons that I have explored in the above discussion, I can say airplanes have changed more than other vehicles.

eyesy

以下是引用wch2001_akuan在2003-9-5 20:13:00的发言：

At first, it seems very difficult for me to answer the statement since each one has changed people's lives very much. However, after serious consideration,  I think airplanes are the transportation that has changed people's lives most. In the following discussion, I will list reasons for the view.

是不是用了废话模版？ I think airplanes change people most.

The most important reason for my propensity for airplane is that it is very convenient. People can go to other 删除 distant places in a few hous. It  shortens the distance among countries. Nowadays, people can have a meeting in London afternoon, and have dinner with their family in Paris, that is unbelievable for people few centuries ago, because they traveled by sail and they must travel several days. 语法要搞清楚

Safety is another head reason that i have chosen to put there. According to some statistic, airplane is  safer than any other vehicles such as railroad. It is reported that the accident  ratio of airplanes is lower than that of trains and ships.

In addtion, it is very enjoyable to take a airplane. When you take a trip by an airplane,  you might cross different rivers,mountains even different continents and time zones. When you get off the airplane, you are in a place where people  say different language.(这些ship和train都可以吧？)

I can not deny that other transportations have changed our lives a lot, however, based on the reasons that I have explored in the above discussion, I can say airplanes have changed more than other vehicles.

Taurus

以下是引用wch2001_akuan在2003-9-5 12:40:00的发言：
谢谢taurus！你真好！
真的，在这里与大家交流的感觉真好！发现比与自己的家人还能说出心里话，特别是在这种情况下，总不会得到谴责：为什么要放弃在中国还算是decent的工作？！为什么在中国不好好学英语？如果这个世界有后悔药的话，每个人还不都喝了好几壶了？所以能得到大家的支持和帮助，我真的很感动！
我想关键是要向前看，和克服目前的困难！

不要客气！还有两天就开学了，我也是趁自己还有空，班门弄斧一把。

走自己的路，让别人去说吧。等你到了这边的时候，你就会知道自己的决定是对的。无论如何，出来见识一下这个世界，蛮有趣的！

衷心祝福你考试顺利！

Taurus

以下是引用eyesy在2003-9-5 18:29:00的发言：
18楼的Taurus，头像真是有个性啊！！而且分析够透彻，猫妹妹我自叹不如…………

哈哈，谢谢eyesy mm，这是一只很稀有的摺耳猫（发现它什么地方不对劲儿了吧？对，它的耳朵是答拉着的！）这宝贝儿正努力地大声叫唤着，照相者的角度选得真好，看上去就象是它在捧腹大笑，够开心！哈哈。。。

wch2001_akuan

谢谢eyesy and taurus,能与大家一起共勉，感觉前进的道路并不孤独！

eyesy

其实我很懒的，10月要考，现在还没状态

wch2001_akuan

eyesy,能分享一下你是怎样复习的吗？

wch2001_akuan

Topic 6: if you could change one important thing in your hometown, what would you change? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The answer to the statement depends on different situation in the hometown where you live. If I were faced with the issue, I would probably do one important thing in my hometown: build up a large shopping center. I would list my reasons to explain the view.

The most important reason why I decide to build up a large shopping center in my hometown is that people in my hometown really need it. There is not any shopping centers in my town even though there are  more than 20,000 people in my neighborhood. Without shopping centers, it is not convenient for people to buy things like foodstuff that people really need in their daily lives. People must go to other communities far from my hometown to buy vegetables, fruits and so on. It is so miserable! If you could see that, you can understant deeply. So I could change something in my hometown, the first one that I exactly change is to build up a large shopping center.

Revenue is another important reason that I have chosen to put there. If a large shopping center could be built, goverrment could take more tax from the large shopping center. As we all know, tax is the main source of revenue. With the enlargement of revenue, goverment would spend more money in building or improving our pubilc sevice.

In addtion,a large shopping center could improve people lives.  eople could find jobs in the large shopping center. And the rate of unemployment would drop,what's more , the income could increase. People could spend more money for their food ,clothes and  education. So people would have a more happy lives.

Of course, there are other important things should be changed. However, the most important thing that should be solved in my hometown at once is to have a large shopping center. Anyway, different people have different choices according to their hometown real situations.

wch2001_akuan

to eyesy, 你在写作文是用模板吗？ 你是怎么做的，在作文这方面？很想找到一个好办法来提高我的作文啊！有时候，我列出了三条理由， 但在写的过程中，却只能写出一句话，（也就是我想出的理由）！我该怎样提高呢？！