biss33：700分的遗憾（在第16页）

babypace

比较下来D好些。E后面的不舒服。in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that wonz这部分放在后面做状语有点转变了句子的中心，从而使意思上不太对。我觉得拿Nobel Prize这部分是句子重点。所以不能作为状语，应该是主句的。A为什么觉得不对？

stevewu

非常同意babypace的見解，E改變了句子的重心，不如D清晰。

A嘛.. 說說幾個看起來不順眼的地方，說錯的話還請nn們指正

1. Turning away..，現在分詞做定語，表長期、持續且一貫的動作（狀態），是否不適合本句？

2. in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist...，這句話是不是說只有1909年S.L.才是novelist，其他時間都不是？

3. who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize ，was應該去掉，才能將 the first woman 和後面的 to win the Nobel Prize 連起來。

babypace

有点道理，我再体会体会。。

biss33

以下是引用stevewu在2005-9-21 14:08:00的发言：

非常同意babypace的見解，E改變了句子的重心，不如D清晰。

A嘛.. 說說幾個看起來不順眼的地方，說錯的話還請nn們指正

1. Turning away..，現在分詞做定語，表長期、持續且一貫的動作（狀態），是否不適合本句？

2. in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist...，這句話是不是說只有1909年S.L.才是novelist，其他時間都不是？

3. who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize ，was應該去掉，才能將 the first woman 和後面的 to win the Nobel Prize 連起來。

1 我认为关于分词ing或done的错误属于相对错误，在排除的时候应该留到最后在使用

（比如选项还剩两个选项其他方面都一样，只有分词这一点明显错误）

在这道题来讲，如果细究起来确实是done形势比较好。

2不太同意。因为按照这种说法，d选项也存在同样的问题became in 1909,不正是表示这个作家仅仅在1909成为了blablabla~.

我觉得时间状语的修饰歧义多由时间状语的位置变化使得修饰对象不清导致。也就是在同一个句子中一个时间状语可以修饰多个人或事，修饰对象混乱容易引起歧义。

3 这里确实存在严重的歧义。但是我觉得如果要修改的话，应该将was掉，变为became。因为如果单独去掉was同样会有歧义————the novelist 与the first swedish平行

open to discuss

tania

以下是引用biss33在2005-9-21 12:43:00的发言：

问ts 4-4：

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life
and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who
became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the
peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in
1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in
1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

这道题好像公认是d 但是我觉的d的前半句存在严重的结构问题，a novelist+who和后半句割裂开，所以我选了e

请大家帮忙讲讲。谢谢

我觉得D没有问题。简化后变成A novelist ，Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win。。。。

前面的novelist是修饰S的，是说一个小说家，S.......。没有任何问题。

E有一个严重的错误，用that作为定语从句的引导词，这里应该用who

Foreastbear

一、writer+to do; writer+doing都行

1. of enthusiastic reviews, with the Guyanese writer winning widespread acclaim for his piercing

2. born novelist, yesterday became the first writer to win two of France's top literary awards   
3. in 1987. He became the first Russian writer to win the prize since Pasternak. His

二、句子重心原因，d比c好，我也选 d  

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biss33

以下是引用tania在2005-9-21 16:23:00的发言：

我觉得D没有问题。简化后变成A novelist ，Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win。。。。

前面的novelist是修饰S的，是说一个小说家，S.......。没有任何问题。

E有一个严重的错误，用that作为定语从句的引导词，这里应该用who

是不是d的结构可以变成这样，A girl who is studying Gmat, Biss is blablabla~

或者更简化一点，A girl, Biss is blabla~

也就是平常的这种说法：As a girl, Biss is blabla~

请教大家！forestbear请把字体调一下好吗？看不清楚啊。谢谢：）

tania

我觉得是可以的

stevewu

偶也認為可以的。

A girl..., Biss blablabla~  可以把 a girl...視為Biss的同位語，相當於 Biss, a girl..., blablabla ~，只是礙於同位語太長，如果放在Biss後面主謂之間距離就隔遠了，為保持結構的清晰就提到句首去。

才疏學淺，一時也舉不出什麼類似的例子，只想到gwd中wasp那題，也是同位語一長串的，只是它放在句末，和本題長得不太像。

Yellow jackets number among the 900 or so species of the world’s social wasps, wasps that live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting almost entirely of females—the queen and her sterile female workers.

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biss33

stevewu 这样一说我更加明白了.谢谢大家!