gwd31-9，倒装后是否仍符合逻辑主语一致的原则，请指教！

心情美丽

D, and was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.

as many of his contemporaries were,插入语

z520m

我觉得是E,D有明显的错误，and is和主句同用一个主语，但是却用逗号隔开，这样的用法在gmat语法中是不对的。E没什么语法错误，除了改变了原句的意思。不过如果没有逗号，那么我认为应该选D,我想很有可能是题目有误。我想请问nn,两句句子公用一个主语and前是不是不能加逗号？

killa

显然是D

steveyangxt

it should be d, a is not correct

rice_stc

Hummm, where can I download GWD31?  

GMAT阿驴

support A  可以用  ,and is 的结构的

msrs

那个NN给解释一下，我选的是A，因为看不出硬伤，但是读起来不是很顺

但是D把从句改成了并列谓语，and was前面的逗号，以及前面的冠词我觉得都是硬伤

gonghao

肯定是D

A：As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects,among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was 主语在哪里？？？

gonghao

应该是As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects，人+。。。。。。。

才是正确的

titatita

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As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among

The most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921)

Who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.

 

1)      As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects.

Among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-

Saens (1835-1921),who was

2)      As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects,

Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile

Musicians of his time. and having been

Having be错

3)      pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among

the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens

(1835-1921), and he was

原句(a选项中)后半句是从句who was而c中变为并列and he was这种改变并列或者从属关系的是改变原意的

4)      Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille

Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile

Musicians of his time. and was

主语Camille Saint-Saens was among(系表结构) and was interested(系表结构)只用一个be即可

5)      pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille

Saint-Saens (1835-1921) ,who was , among the Musicians of his time. one of the

Most gifted and versatile, had been

Had been改变原句时态,而且用过去完成时态不符合句意,改句表达的是这个人的一种状态,句中没有任何提示说这个人的兴趣在过去某一时点停止.

我支持选a

a看不出明显错误,但却是也别扭

同位语,among....,主语

a