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Bumblebees live in colonies of several hundred that often have many queens as well as a large number of workers
A) of several hundred that often have many queens as well as
第一遍看过去,语法正确,没什么大毛病,先放着。
B) of several hundred, often with many of them being queens as well as having
often with 表达awkward,然后看到了万恶的having。
C) having several hundred, and often many of them are queens as well as
万恶的having,明显不如that have表达准确。而且后面加上了and,似乎想表达平衡,但是并没有。
D) that have several hundred of them, often with many queens as well as
B live in colonies that have..., often with...as well as...乍看上去也没有语法错误,先放着。
E) with several hundred that often have many queens as well as having
with可不可代替of不知道,但是句子后面又出现了having。
所以第一遍读下来,就剩下选项A和D。
A:Bumblebees live in colonies of several hundred that often have many queens as well as a large number of workers
D:Bumblebees live in colonies that have several hundred of them, often with many queens as well as a large number of workers
先把主谓宾拎出来
B live in colonies of...that have X as well as Y.
B live in colonies that have..., often with X as well as Y.
现在看就很清楚,A的表达简洁、有效,D里面有often with这个表达奇怪的术语,把that have...故意用逗号断开,加了一个修饰,是不必要的。所以还是选A。
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