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hkrmoom

In times of economic crisis, in which field do you think the government can cut financial support?
1. Education 2. Healthcare 3. Unemployment.

In the river of human’s history,economic crisis is somehow unavoidable and periodicly occuring.Under the devastation of economic crisis,the government is responsible for making the ends meet.As a inevitable result,some financial supports shoul be cutted.I hold the view that the government can cut the financial support in unemployment affairs.

To begin with,there lies a trend that those unemployed individuals enjoy too much.In the period of promising economy.For guaranting a respectful life standard to the unemplyed,the govenment spent too much in the unemployment affairs.For example,the unemplyed can receive a high subsidy that can ensure them a good life,and rediculously,the subsidy can sometimes outweight a normal salary.That is just like a big pile from sky!Thus,the high subsidy forms a negtive incentive for the unemployed to find a job for themselves.As a result,more and more people,who are healthy and able to work for survival,depend on the subsidy and do not want to work.That is a big burden of our government!So,cutting the financial support in unemployment is an urgency.

Moreover,there can be another way to solve unemployment problems-the government can hire the unemployed to work for some public construction and give them salary instead of subsidy.As we all know,one effective way to combat economic crisis is to construct public projects,which can not only serve for the long-term prospect but also stimulate economy in the short term.See,compared with cutting financial support in education or in healthcare issues,cutting financial support in unemployment can overtly find ways to offset the negtive effect of cutting.Besides,to take the severity of the economic crisis into account,every individuals should take his or her part in helping and reconstructing the economy,and that totally comfirms my propensity.

Aside from the reasons above,another vital and notable factor that puch my inclination is that educaiton and healthcare have superior significance to unemployment issues.It is a commom sense that good education serve as a engineer of promising economy.Without those talents,who are the product of good education,there is no hope for the a nation’s economy and future.And why we attach much preciousness to healthcare is becaus it is the base of a uprising sociaty.Only when people live a healthy life,they can work hard and struggle together to fight against the economic crisis.

For the considerations above,I firmly believe that in terms of economic crisis,cutting financial support in euemployment affairs is a good way.

hkrmoom

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