topic119文中的几句话不知对错，希望大家指点

simba-billy

119. do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave

differently when they wear different clothes.Do you agree that different clothes

influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answers.

1）I would probably follow the title statement.我想表达的意思是我agree作文题目的观点，但是不知道title+staement行不行？因为title没有adj.的形式，又怕这两个n.不能这样连接用。

2）in our modern sociaty,clothes play a definitely significant role in our judgement of other people,and so do othes judge us in that way.不知道结构和语法有没有错，总觉得写完又种不顺的感觉

3）the feelings of us influenced by the attitudes received from others may have an effort on the action of us问题同上

还有就是这篇文章真让我头疼，只能想到一个方面的理由，怎么办呀？

aprilar

先声明我的水平也不是很高

(2)society拼措了，definitely放在play之前，不过definitely个人觉得太口语化了

simba-billy

我看了几篇别人写的，确定是可以用title statement了，呵呵

怎么没有人帮忙改一下呢？

pengstone

以下是引用simba-billy在2005-5-1 10:11:00的发言：

119. do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave

differently when they wear different clothes.Do you agree that different clothes

influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answers.

1）I would probably follow the title statement.我想表达的意思是我agree作文题目的观点，但是不知道title+staement行不行？因为title没有adj.的形式，又怕这两个n.不能这样连接用。

可以这样用

2）in our modern sociaty,clothes play a definitely significant role in our judgement of other people,and so do othes judge us in that way.不知道结构和语法有没有错，总觉得写完又种不顺的感觉

in our modern society, clothes definitely play a significant role in our judgement of other people; likewise, other person may also judge us from what we are dressing.  这样写比较啰嗦，但意思更清楚些。注意，在考试时，首先要保证你的意思被准确地表达，其次再谈得上文笔。

3）the feelings of us influenced by the attitudes received from others may have an effort on the action of us问题同上

our feelings influenced by other people's attitude toward us have an effort on our behaviour.

还有就是这篇文章真让我头疼，只能想到一个方面的理由，怎么办呀？

simba-billy

thaks a lot