039TWE 在有两天就要考试了，这是我在30分钟内的作文，大家看能得多少分？

枯藤昏鸭

039 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

   When it comes to whether students can learn more information quickly with the help of technology, people always faced the dilemma condition. Quit a few people hold the opinion that technology changes the students study habits and help them learn more quickly, while on the contrary, others deem the way students acquire technology does not change. According personal experience, personality type and personal education, I prefer to the former idea, because I think it has too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages. And I would here explain a few of most important reasons why I think the technology change the students study habits.

   The essential reason can be seen by most people is that with the help of technology, students not only can lean more knowledge but also can learn more rapidly. With the development of the network, students have more and more approach to acquire knowledge. They can search more information from the internet.

   Furthermore, with the help of the technology, students can communicate easily with teacher, thus, they can improve their study efficiency. Teachers teach the students in class with computer, it looks so clear and students can master it very easy.

   The third reason is that with the help of the technology, students can lean information in any times. And they do not study in regular times. If they have no time in daytime , they can learn it at evening.

   Taking into account all theses factors, we can find out that students can acquire more benefits with the development of technology. So from we had discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that that students can lean more information and learn more quickly with the help of technology.  

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以下是引用枯藤昏鸭在2005-4-3 6:03:00的发言：

039 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

   When it comes to whether students can learn more information quickly with the help of technology, people always faced the dilemma condition. Quit a few people hold the opinion that technology changes the students study habits and help them learn more quickly, while on the contrary, others deem the way students acquire technology does not change. According personal experience, personality type and personal education, I prefer to the former idea, because I think it has too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages. And I would here explain a few of most important reasons why I think the technology change the students study habits.

   The essential reason can be seen by most people is that with the help of technology, students not only can lean more knowledge but also can learn more rapidly. With the development of the network, students have more and more approach to acquire knowledge. They can search more information from the internet.

   Furthermore, with the help of the technology, students can communicate easily with teacher, thus, they can improve their study efficiency. Teachers teach the students in class with computer, it looks so clear and students can master it very easy.

   The third reason is that with the help of the technology, students can lean information in any times. And they do not study in regular times. If they have no time in daytime , they can learn it at evening.

   Taking into account all theses factors, we can find out that students can acquire more benefits with the development of technology. So from we had discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that that students can lean more information and learn more quickly with the help of technology.  

The article is not well structured, especiall because the first para is too long.

I think it is an 4-5 score article.