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第一次写Why的文章,不知道模板是不是能这么用~请指点下~

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楼主
发表于 2005-3-27 12:42:00 | 只看该作者

第一次写Why的文章,不知道模板是不是能这么用~请指点下~

如题,因为一直都不会写这类文章,希望哥哥姐姐们能给偶点建议和意见~



161. People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.



It takes us forever to forget some of gifts given for special meaning. Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, different people hold different reasons of this statement. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to make a mention of other people’s opinion. Many people might think all of the gifts are the same. Others, on the other hand, who have received some presents which are important for them, may think special gifts bring them happiness. However, I shall agree that the later one is more reasonable. In the following discussion, I will reason and provide evidences to discuss my viewpoint.



No issue is more important that this one that special gifts represent the significant memory. Facts witness and present an example that no one can forget the gifts that are given for being accepted by an ideal university or making a big progress on the school work, because these memories are affects of your life. I think there are no better examples than this one to prove this point more clearly.



The fact that it is hard to forget the presents given by important person is another reason I have chosen to put here. Let me choose the gift given by your first lover as an example. Now, five or ten years after, you may still retain the book or picture that you accepted from your first boyfriend or girlfriend because they used to play a significant role in your life. If you can see it, you can understand my opinion more deeply.



Admittedly, there is no denying that these gifts may be very useful or which you have expected to have for a long time. For example, when I was fifteen-year-old girl, I wished that my parents would buy me a computer because I used to be interested in computer game. Fortunately, my dad bought me my own computer, which has been used by me for six years. By now, I still remember that computer and how happy I was when I accepted it.



To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that it is easy for people to remember special gifts and presents.


沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-28 09:11:00 | 只看该作者
马上要考试了,请大家帮忙给点意见吧,谢谢了先~
板凳
发表于 2005-3-28 23:49:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用ivy1025919在2005-3-27 12:42:00的发言:

如题,因为一直都不会写这类文章,希望哥哥姐姐们能给偶点建议和意见~


161. People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.






It takes us forever to forget some of gifts given for special meaning. Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, different people hold different reasons of this statement. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to make a mention of other people’s opinion. Many people might think all of the gifts are the same. Others, on the other hand, who have received some presents which are important for them, may think special gifts bring them happiness. However, I shall agree that the later one is more reasonable. In the following discussion, I will reason and provide evidences to discuss my viewpoint.






No issue is more important that this one that special gifts represent the significant memory. Facts witness and present an example that no one can forget the gifts that are given for being accepted by an ideal university or making a big progress on the school work, because these memories are affects of your life. I think there are no better examples than this one to prove this point more clearly.






The fact that it is hard to forget the presents given by important person is another reason I have chosen to put here. Let me choose the gift given by your first lover as an example. Now, five or ten years after, you may still retain the book or picture that you accepted from your first boyfriend or girlfriend because they used to play a significant role in your life. If you can see it, you can understand my opinion more deeply.






Admittedly, there is no denying that these gifts may be very useful or which you have expected to have for a long time. For example, when I was fifteen-year-old girl, I wished that my parents would buy me a computer because I used to be interested in computer game. Fortunately, my dad bought me my own computer, which has been used by me for six years. By now, I still remember that computer and how happy I was when I accepted it.






To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that it is easy for people to remember special gifts and presents.





Did you write within 30 min?


地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-29 05:54:00 | 只看该作者
差不多30分钟吧,因为模板占了很大比例,所以我真正写的东西很少~ 请问你觉得讲原因的作文能这么写吗?
5#
 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-29 05:56:00 | 只看该作者
我明天考试,好怕啊。。。。。
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