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everjeff

Title:  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by the guide.

 

  It is commonly thought that traveling is a effective way to reduce the pressure from study and work, and thus a number of people would like to composing a group to travel all over the world. I am one of the people who bolster this opinion. One of my main reasons may involve the consideration that traveling with others in a group can increase people’s perspective to some extent. To prove it, people can understand different culture and knowledge during traveling, on account that various residents have different cultural as well as educational background. Consequently, traveling with others is an good approach to increase our visions.

  Secondly, the account is that traveling with others is one of the safest methods in the world. No doubt, what we can notice is that people can look after each other and have a good communication during traveling. For example, some people, because of the change of weather condition, who are under the weather during traveling. More importantly, he did not take the drug before traveling, and others will help him solve this problem, which results in a good health in the end. In contrast, he may not finish all paths of traveling.

  However, I can cast doubt on the argument conducted that traveling alone can not only have the free time but travel any place in terms with your preference as well. The first point is that tourists should be encouraged to allocate the time for having a good travel, which increases their perspectives and enhances knowledge field. In addition, I doubt that enjoying the precious scene will cultivate their aesthetic spirit and reduce the pressure from study and work. But overall, traveling alone is better than other forms in the real condition.

 My view is that traveling with others in a group is an effective way to reduce the pressure from study and work and get more entertainment can make more friends, enjoy the independent life by you, and thus people should have an independent life experience by traveling with others. Consequently, people are expected to travel with others in a group.

inmydream

飘过！

最好的方式是（理想中）

在好导游的带领下和一群人一起旅游，当中最好有一个亲密的朋友，同时还能结识更多有趣的新朋友。因为如果自己弄住宿、吃饭、往返旅费太费事了，弄不好还影响旅游的心情。

但是在每一个有价值的景点，一定要留充分的时间给我们领略和欣赏。之后还有比如一两天的自由活动。但现实是做梦，跟团的结果就是一天走马观花N个地方，还有明的暗的强迫消费。我们的旅游完全是走出来的，不是游出来的，完了只知道去了很多地方，但却没机会知道这些地方更为美妙的精彩之处。

（貌似文不对题了）

everjeff

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