以下为个人意见,欢迎NN指正: A.In recent years, Sideburns became increasingly popular through whole western countries, later adopted in Japan 。 后面如果为独立主格, 是否应该有个名词在adopted前面?避免修饰歧义(否则adopted 有就近修饰western countries的嫌疑),比如: In recent years, Sideburns became increasingly popular through whole western countries, a style later adopted in Japan 。 E,In recent years, Sideburns became increasingly popular through whole western countries,later in Japan。 后面的later in Japan 为later Sideburns became increasingly popular in Japan 的缩写吗? 最近这些年来,Sideburns 风行西方国家,之后更风行到(东方国家)日本。 暂时选E了,考试再细看。 请NN指正。。。
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