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[备考日记] [原创]30天冲刺托福!141楼,分数。

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-1 23:03:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用yaya322在2007-7-1 22:40:00的发言:

嗯,谢谢鼓励!!

告诉你哦,我在好几年前考过一次GRE,虽然的确是因为复习得不好才考得不好,可是还是有点小阴影哦,呵呵

原本打算这次找回信心的,结果还是惰性使然,不知道这个月的二十八号会怎么样,

本来说今天要写第一篇作文的,结果又没写,检讨!明天一定要写!

yaya, 我这次考完估计也会有GRE阴影了。数学都没有考好。

还有好多天呢,好好努力,肯定可以的。

32#
发表于 2007-7-1 23:27:00 | 只看该作者

我也备考中,现在上班忙,只能挤时间看。一起加油

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-2 09:28:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用leiby1019在2007-7-1 23:27:00的发言:

我也备考中,现在上班忙,只能挤时间看。一起加油

 
一起加油
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-2 21:01:00 | 只看该作者

7月2

进入7月了,写一下自己的进度和打算吧

打算10号前解决掉delta和OG

现在delta已经完成了 阅读 到1.7  听力到Q3 都过半了。

小秘密:写作和口语,我参加了一个小组织,可以督促自己了

http://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-694644-1-1.html

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发表于 2007-7-2 21:08:00 | 只看该作者
哈哈,真可爱,秘密说出来就不是秘密了哦,莫非这就是所谓的“小秘密”?呵呵,
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发表于 2007-7-3 00:19:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用watershed在2007-7-1 21:32:00的发言:

7月1日

终于写了一篇作文,大突破啊。

没想到才考完GRE几个月,手现在这么不热,写了一个多小时,唉,相当丢人。

今天开始做delta的听力了,虽然去年听过两遍了,发现还是很多听得不是很清楚,需要加强。

作文如下,欢迎大家来拍!

作文 (建造分类):

2 It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

Restaurant plays an important role in our life, which can save our cooking time, serve rich banquet and afford a place where we can entertain friends. At present, a new restaurant has been announced to be built in our neighborhood, and the construction of a new one would have both positive and negative effects on our community. Overall, I believe the new factory would give us more advantages than disadvantages.

第一段 我没找到topic sentence. 你先说restaurant plays important role in our life. This is good.  然后你说construction of a new one ( 并没凸现出restaurant 好). 最后你又说factory.

First of all, it is so convenient to find a restaurant near community that we really have no reason to deny that we can enjoy delicious food without either long walking or additional traffic expending is a boon.(这一句有点长了吧。OG中5,6分范文每段都没这么长。此句前边你用了convenient 后边又用 without either walking or additional traffic ...。有点画蛇添足的感觉) 

纯是我个人观点。

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-3 09:05:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用yaya322在2007-7-2 21:08:00的发言:
哈哈,真可爱,秘密说出来就不是秘密了哦,莫非这就是所谓的“小秘密”?呵呵,

嘿嘿,这个帖子支持的人不多吗,反正也没多少然看到。

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-3 09:06:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用lisalisalisa在2007-7-3 0:19:00的发言:

谢谢哈。

我刚考完GRE,现在写文章的思路完全是AW的。

39#
发表于 2007-7-3 09:37:00 | 只看该作者

我的作文水平实在是太差了,

所以只能在精神上支持你,

就没办法给你改作文了


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 楼主| 发表于 2007-7-3 21:43:00 | 只看该作者

7月3日

今天完全的堕落了,而且可能还要堕落两天

MM回国,要全程陪同,虽然说好她来督促我学习,估计可能性不大

今天下午和晚上陪同学出去买了东西,真是罪恶

唯一的亮点是写了一篇作文

If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Facing the aim of both increasing the profit and improving the competitiveness of our company, a dilemma that whether an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary should be hired are often presented to the employer. I believed, comparing both the pros and cons of them, an inexperience worker at lower salary should be preferred.


To begin with, to control cost is the first financial principle to every enterprise. Most work in the company can be finished by the people after simple training in fact, and only rarely few positions need the workers with strong backgrounds and relative experiences. To choose the worker at the lower salary is an immediate means to reduce human resource cost and increase the profit. One apt illustration of this point involves the part-time job plan championed by McDonald’s. This company employs many inexperienced part-time workers and controls their cost effectively, and thus they can support the cheap food all the world.

Further more, experienced workers do not mean that they would have a better performance than inexperienced ones. Accordingly, I concede that experienced workers usually are more family with their job, and thus they can assume their duty professionally more swiftly. Yet, inexperienced workers may finish their work much better after training, either for their passion to new job, or due to their plasticity in new situation. Facts witness and present many examples. GE, Google, Microsoft and other famous companies emphasize their recruitment on campus hiring, just for the purpose of find totally fresh "blood".

In addition, on the notion of "experience" lies my third argument. A successful company should put right person in right position, but the experienced workers are not necessarily the suitable people. Their experience often formed from their job before, which inevitably has a considerable distance with their new duties. Besides, this argument leads inexorably to the company's management system that this brief essay cannot begin to address.

Admittedly, experienced workers are somewhat challenging as well because of both their strong backgrounds and sufficient understandings. However, given the realistic profit consideration of the company, that inexperienced worker, I still prefer.

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