求两篇哥哥AA作文思路 谢谢 （急）

janetking

17. 题库129. The following appeared as part of the business plan of the Capital Idea investment firm:
“Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had business increases over the past two years. Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district. As a condition, we should require them to participate in a special program: Any customer who patronizes two of the businesses will receive a substantial discount at the third. By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each and maximize our return.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
13. 题库116. The following appeared in a memorandum to a team developing accounting software for SmartPro Software, Inc.:
“Currently, more professional accountants use SmartPro accounting software than any other brand. However, in the market for personal accounting software for non-professionals to use in preparing their income tax returns, many of our competitors are outselling us. In surveys, our professional customers repeatedly say that they have chosen SmartPro Software because our most sophisticated software products include more advanced special features than competing brands. Therefore, the most effective way for us to increase sales of our personal accounting software for home users would clearly be to add the advanced special features that our professional software products currently offer.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
这两篇的攻击点我觉得很弱 有的甚至找不到 求思路 谢谢！！！！

OliverJ

同问129  ~

116.    错误类比 PROFESSIONAL 和 PERSONAL    ro的意见不一定代表 Per      似乎其他的也逻辑错误好难找啊 ~

janetking

同问129  ~

116.    错误类比 PROFESSIONAL 和 PERSONAL    ro的意见不一定代表 Per      似乎其他的也逻辑错误好难找啊 ~

-- by 会员 OliverJ (2010/2/1 11:16:32)

对啊。我觉得最多找到一个。所以求帮助哈。等待NN们解决

chenminying

129.

1, the success of the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club does not guarantee the success of the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club

2, the success of the 3 business in Park Hill district within the past  two years does not warrant to contine to be profitable in the coming years

3, the program promoted will not surely prove plausible. People may don't have the equal interest in the other two of the new business the Irongate district.

janetking

129.

1, the success of the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club does not guarantee the success of the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club

2, the success of the 3 business in Park Hill district within the past  two years does not warrant to contine to be profitable in the coming years

3, the program promoted will not surely prove plausible. People may don't have the equal interest in the other two of the new business the Irongate district.

-- by 会员 chenminying (2010/2/1 11:31:56)

经你一说 发现还是有很多FLAW的啊。。。╮(╯▽╰)╭ 快考试就慌了阵脚了。谢谢你啊。

OliverJ

补充下后面那个  可以说 影响销量的因素有很多  个人用户 可能还关注其他因素  如价格，user-frendly，easy to use 等等。。

两点之后  再说下如何加强  字数应该够了 ~

janetking

谢谢楼上。我明白了。