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Topic:142,A gift(such as a camera,a soccer ball.or an animal)can contribute to a child's development.
What gift would you give to help a chils develop?Why?Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

Start:
The world is now getting more complex and complete,numerous kinds of things,for instance ,computer,PSP,PS2,
or ipod MP4 ,these new-invented electic objects seem to have occupied the majority of the human's life time,
and play an significant role on our daily life.However,such kind of players might only influence on the
interest of a person,but to the developpment of a child,it is,in many cases,nothing.Unlike these products,
a camera might be the gift which benifit a child a lot,this is not only because it is a tool which could take pictures,
but also because it is an eye that might help a shild to communicate with this colourful and complex world.

Camera is born to take pictures undoubtlly,just as radio is born to play musics.But the camera do have its
pros which could give a child an eye to see the real world,while other things such as ipod,computer,PSP,they just circumscribe the boundries of a person.As a matter of fact,we children do paid too much attention on our classrom working,consequently,a proper time of relax is necessary.When a child is swampped in taking pictures,that does not mean this child is going to be a potographer in the future,that means he or she is tend to approch the world with reality and beauty.One news in CTYU newspaper showed that a boy live in western area of the United States called Jason,had just finished his last reserch paper of "Season in my hometown",which reported to be the winner paper of the competition in their local area.And after the competition,the boy was crouded by the mass media and he answered some questions,meanwhile,he told to the media that what the definitive reason that leaded to his success is the experience he gained from using the camera and at the same time he pinpointed thet it is the camera that shortened the distance between he and his sourrdings.This news might be convincingly proved that camera might be a considerable choice as a gift to a child,which has obviously advantages when compaired with other objects.
transient
Furthermore,things like ipod,PSP,PS2,might be transient possessions that lack of something,called perminent values,which a camera do has.For instance,a photo taken in one's childhood that describes the first time he or she got awarded.This mermorible time was taken in the camera and when the child grow up,he or she takes out of these pictures again and numbers of pictures might continuelly appear in his or her mind,which may powerfully encourage one's work or study.So this functions of a camera would not be replaced by any tools.

To give a final conclusion,camera,as a common electic tool,it has advantages in communicating with the world which could made a child optimictic and open-minded,experienced and active,and also has advantages in reviewing the childhood which might in some cases give one titanic confidence and touchments.That's why camera far outweigh other gifts,








直到写得很烂，但是帮忙拍一下。。谢谢。。