请教一下 。。。 谢谢 。。。

baNbaN

看见很多讨论说最好的这种魔板都把最后一点反面的东西写在第4段后面 想请教一下如果把反面的东西放在最后一段也就是第5段的conclusion里面说 会不会对电脑对魔板的评分有所影响 。。。   

brace

那就等于没结论段落了。

pengstone

以下是引用brace在2005-5-5 10:25:00的发言：

那就等于没结论段落了。

baNbaN

以下是引用brace在2005-5-5 10:25:00的发言：

那就等于没结论段落了。

我的意思是最后一段总的还是结论 只是略带一点相对不重要的反面的东西 并且最后一句话再加一点prediction 这样会不会合理一些 。。。 因为这个反方面的东西基本上是属于题外话 所以是不是放在最后一段说会比较好一点 因为不影响主要的3个具体观点的构架 。。。   

baNbaN

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
   While it is true that we learn and develop throughout our lives, it is during childhood that we learn the most essential things and develop the most important qualities. Therefore, I agree that the time from birth to twelve years of age is the most important years of a person’s life because people’s basic characteristics are formed during these years. Many significant skills are taught in childhood; children are easier to educate.
   It is during childhood that our basic characters are formed. The values we are taught and the experience we have/encounter during childhood will affect us for the rest of our lives. For example, if we learn the values of kindness and honesty at an early age we will likely become kind and honest adults. In other words, the way we learn to behave as children will become our automatic behaviours (ingrained behaviours) in adulthood.  Therefore, the foundation of our basic character is formed during childhood.
   A person’s childhood years are the most important years of a person's life not only because people’s basic characters are formed during these years but also because many significant skills are taught in the childhood. Our many basic skills, such as standing, running, or speaking, are taught when we are very young, and these skills are significant to our existence. As for me, I learned how to use chopsticks when I was young, and I continue to repeat this action daily without having to think about how it is done. As a result, using chopsticks as a tool for eating becomes an essential skill during daily life. Thus, skills taught at an early age are important.
   Moreover, children are easier to educate. A child’s brain is like an absorbent sponge, and this means children have a better ability to acquire knowledge. As we know, a child finds it easier to study foreign languages than an adult, so we can enable our children to easily learn more foreign languages rather than struggling to learn them when they become adults. Therefore, children are more educable.
   To sum up, for the reasons above, I believe that a person's childhood years are the most important years of a person's life. However, we can not neglect the importance of studying in the high school or university when children grow up. The more attention paid to children, the stronger they will grow.

比如说这个吧 我写的作文 我觉得似乎把反面的东西放在最后一段用一个however一笔带过比放在倒数第2段会好一点 因为不太会影响3个支持观点的段落的结构？ 并且最后一点我首先是给出了conclusion 。。。 请教一下 。。。

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-5-5 19:22:17编辑过]

hncsxj

还是觉得分开好，一段表达一个意思。