听说机经区的小伙伴人多，来问一下一个语法点，在线等

余同学GMAT加油

我在cd上看到了这个（我直接传图片上来了以为是截图）
然后再做GWD的时候发现了这题

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

A.        Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

B.        Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

C.       Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds

D.       The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds

E.        Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds

元叔对A 的解释是

A.        Condensing这里会修饰句子的逻辑主语，如果需要修饰水的话应该改成condenses;

问题：既然我贴上的那个图里面slowing可以修饰同为从句的which（the weather）为什么这里的condense不能修饰that（the ocean's water)

maggie303

如果按照A，condensing主语变成了clouds,但应该是water condense成为clouds.而且句子结构前面很长，没有C句优美。不管从意思还是结构都是C对

海燕山扛把子

C 对
A选项的逻辑主语有问题

quanquan0525

余同学GMAT加油 发表于 2014-4-28 16:05
首先谢谢小伙伴的回答啊  然后这题的答案是C。。。。因为说A里面condensing修饰的逻辑主语的clouds所以错 ...

我以为说A对。。。然后就顺着A去理解了
你看正确答案C啊 water evaporates, rises,condenses 这是一个过程
如果ving做伴随结果 就成了water rises的结果 我从C这么倒退是这么想的

余同学GMAT加油

quanquan0525 发表于 2014-4-28 15:48
没太明白小伙伴的意思。你放的图也看不全啊
condensing就是ving结构在句子中做状语呀，伴随结果，逻辑主语 ...

首先谢谢小伙伴的回答啊  然后这题的答案是C。。。。因为说A里面condensing修饰的逻辑主语的clouds所以错了。我想问的是既然我贴上的那个图里面slowing可以修饰同为从句的which（the weather）为什么这里的condense不能修饰that（the ocean's water)

quanquan0525

没太明白小伙伴的意思。你放的图也看不全啊
condensing就是ving结构在句子中做状语呀，伴随结果，逻辑主语是所修饰句子的动作发出者
B 没谓语动词
C 改变句子结构 重心
D 也是改变句子结构，which指代dust错误。warmed by the Sun即使是并列成分也缺Be动词
E 改变句子结构，which指代