求牛人讲解 GWD 一套 SC

yanwang1018

Althoughpeople in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the UnitedStates, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

A.    peoplein France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
B.     people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.    fattyfoods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the UnitedStates’s, their
D.    therate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same,the
E.     therate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the UnitedStates, the
 求牛人讲解， 我觉得至少应该是D或者E把，因为后面主句得主语是the rate 呢啊
为何是B 呢

efsefs

... rate of people应该理解为人的rate和原文意思不符吧

yanwang1018

恩恩，理解了呢，

specta

D: ...rate of ... foods... is ... the same, 错误比较明显吧
E: ... rate of .... consuming.... is ... the same in A an in B 错。if anything, 应为rate in A is the same as that in B. 但是尽管这样，一来不好处理people consuming, 二来此结构也太wordy了。

B简洁且正确