一个作文JJ ~ 请教下思路 谢谢：）

lastsummer2005

The following appeared in a memorandum from the information technology department of a major advertising firm:
“The more efficient a firm’s employees are, the more profitable that firm will be. Improvements in a firm’s information technology hardware and software are a proven way to increase the efficiency of employees who do the majority of their work on computers. Therefore, if our firm invests in the most powerful and advanced information technology available, employee productivity will be maximized. This strategy ensures that every dollar spent on enhanced information technology will help to increase our firm’s profit margins.”

我想到了两点点 可是又觉得怪怪的 而且一般不是应该写出三点么.... ：
1.invests in the most powerful and advanced information technology available ： 最高级的软件不一定使用于本公司
2. 应该做收益成本分析，不然profit-margins 不一定就高

求教...

lastsummer2005

谢谢~~~~~~~

mitang610

公司员工不一定接受最高级软件 或者接受需要培训 可能需要更大的cost. 公司的profit取决很多方面, 不光只有  firm’s employees are more efficient.