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题目：Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish ,How  would you use this land?

     If  I could receive some land I would build a big monument to commemorate Shaoqi Liu ,a chinese famous statesman ,who had said to the world :preserving the environment is the most significant thing during developing the economy.Let us have a look at the world around,global warming ,acid rain,the depletion of the ozone layerand the smog,I have to admit ,human beings are suffering from "the rewards" the enviroment has return to them.Thus ,it's time to remind people of the nessecity to have more attention on our environment .So I would build a monument to commemorate Shaoqi Liu and to alarm human beings that the nature has taken a toll on the world we live in .

  Global warming ,a form of air pollution,has caused an increase of the global temperature ,And this can result in a rise in sea levels that will inundate numerous low-lying island nations and flood many coastal cities ,such as New York city.Aside from the catastrophic consequences of a rise in sea levels ,global warming also will lead to  more  extreme weathers with more powerful storms and longer droughts.

  Take my coutry China for example ,this year,China suffered from extreme weathers from west to south .Floods and storms destroyed a number of buildings in the West China while South China suffered from a record-breaking hot days and the most severe droughts.

  In summary,these vivid true stories make me can't keep silent any longer.I want to tell people we must start to take some effective meatures to preserve the environment ,our homeland.So ,you know,if I could receive some land ,i would have no hesitance to build a monument for Shaowi Liu so as to always  human beings  at any time .