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3，Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

The past twentieth century has brought with it many advances, within which food preparation has encountered a revolutionary change. Upon to the question that whether this change contributes to the improvement of human’s lives, I undoubtedly subscribe to it, and even regard that people have benefited much from easy food preparation.

 

Now there is a growing awareness that no issue is more important than saving time. It relies on the fact that “Time is life”, such saying provides a so strong support to my view. Furthermore, to illustrate it, just imagine some situations: would you like to take half an hour to cut potatoes rather than pre-prepared ones? Would you like to clean the vegetables before doing tedious cooking work which is only for filling with your stomach? Would you like to waste your precious time by sitting in the kitchen, leaving your urgent assignment or task unfinished? If you had experienced these, you could not agree with me even enough.

 

Another equally important reason is that family relationship will get stronger. First, preparing food more easily leads to more opportunities for housewives to pursue couples’ common hobbies such as watching TV and dancing. Second, men who never stepped into the kitchen before are becoming willing to help housewives preparing food, because it becomes a way of appreciating life after a day’s hard working. Therefore, food preparation is no longer detrimental to the relationship between couples, even a comfortable communication chance for them.

 

Superior as easy food preparation is, however, it also has own demerits, such as youngsters’ getting into unhealthy eating habits with fast food and food materials with some artificial ingredients. Nevertheless, these disadvantages carry much less weight than the advantages of easy food preparation, so it is obvious that the remarkable change of food preparation influences human’s lives quite positively.

 

To sum up, from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that people improve their lives much through the great evolution of food preparation, for two most important reasons which are time saving and family relationship. In fact, the easier food preparation is, the more contribution it makes to human’s lives.