【AWA求指导】

Gwong

“The claims of some politicians that we are on the brink of an energy crisis are misguided. We have enough oil in reserve to see through any  roduction shortage and  the supply of in-grouund oil is no danger of running out any time soon. There is thus no need to set aside the technology and infrastructure of a century of oil-based energy.”

我自己主要找到几个点：
1. soon→很远的将来
2. technology and infrastructure of a century of oil-based energy   有它的除了save oil的其他好处
3.没有任何的数据或者引用就给出决定性的结论



但是还是感觉写起来怪怪的，请教各位大佬的思路~~~

mynamesp

现在够用不代表将来够用， 储存在减少， 而且不可再生， 人口增加， 需求会增大
除了经济因素还要考虑环境因素， 现有的技术会污染环境， 反过来需要更多的资金去治理环境

Gwong

求大神指点一二呀！！！

Gwong

顶楼主！               

Gwong

顶楼主！