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49 Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.

Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

提纲：
1意见相投利于进步，不同意见有妨碍作用，来自人们趋利避害的本性，得到夸奖和认同，自然希望继续下去，反之则亦然。
2但是不同意见是否起到阻碍作用取决于人的心态。
有很多时候负面反应时有利于进步的，因为促使自己看到自身缺点。
3另外，即使异议不利进步，也不能说相同意见有利于进步，进步取决于除了他人意见以外的很多因素。
最后强调，重要的是建立自己评判体系价值取向，内心清醒，强大自己，获取进步。

Does opponents' idea deter one's progress? Does supporters' idea help one's advancement? Though it is possible, never comes it for sure.



Initially, we should admit that there is such a possibility that the same ideas and positive critics can help progress, while different opinions inhabit from advancing. This phenomenon comes from humans' nature that approaching to the advantage and avoiding from the disadvantage. That is to say, when a person gets appreatiation towards their struggle from others, they tend to fell satisfied and desire to go on and obtain more agreements. And at the same time, their confidence and interest on this field which he or she is working on will be escalated. Then getting progress is a normal thing. On the other hand, when harsh and severe reactions flush into one's mind, there is a very strong psychological reflection that he has no gift on this area or get more and more confused on teh way to progress. Thus, it do make sense to construct a positive relationship between others' opinions and the condition of one's progress.



However, even though the assertion appears to happen in the reality, it is never certain to say that opponent's ideas can prevent one from progressing.



For one thing, what the press from disagreement will affect has something to do with one's attitude towards them. To the optimists, stress may represent motivation. With the failure, stronger determination, courage, and new ideas about how to promote will come together. But to the pessimists,counterviews are direct cause of suspicion, disappointments and even stop. Actually, it's the pessimistic attitude and vulnerable self that beat them, rather than others' ideas.



For another thing, what cannot be omitted is the critics' active effect to progress. Just like one important principle in Maxims’ philosophy, a contradiction is the source of progress. People get larger opportunity to do better after considering various opinions including mass negative voices. After all, in the procedure of wording hard, one apt to be more and more confident in the pattern of him, ignoring a lot of normal and even obvious mistakes. Only with the help of others' critics, can he get clear with the faults. One practical experience of my friend, Lisa just demonstrates the point. Based on exceptional rich experience on making magazines, Lisa gets a internship chance as iebook editor in a famous magazine company. When she shows the first sample edition to her friend, surprisingly, handful of defects came except for the merits. After negotiating with her friend and correcting it carefully, the edition was passed smoothly. Just think about it, where is the success of the first sample without the opponents' suggestions? So, even good advices are harsh to the ear, progress often come after them.



Eventually, there is one significant point. Even though different ideas prevent one from advancing, it doesn't mean that people will advance in agreements. In the fact, progression has matter with many elements beyond others' idea, such as gift, psychological quality,  degree of struggling, and working conditions. With the synthesis function with all the factors can help one to advance.



Thus, for improving, one should set up a strong inner spirit,as well as taking advantage of positive conditions,  rather than dependent progress on others' views. After all, the  inner quality of one person may be more crucial to get substantial progress.

竹林中人

avoid直接接宾语不用加from.
小的语法错误不少，可以放到word上好好查查。

竹林中人

感觉语言表达不够精炼，希望在写句子的时候自己反复读一下感受下

竹林中人

开头不建议这么写，比较冒险，保守点直接讲明自己的观点。你的思路还是不错的，因为语言没有表达组织好，影响了论述效果。

theopenwindow

嗯···真心决定放慢脚步，开始狠改···！多谢竹林中人，话说最近怎么没看到您老人家的大作

竹林中人

这些天回家了，但家里电脑坏了，没法写，只能手机上网

theopenwindow

( ⊙o⊙ )哇，这还能批作文，鼓掌！