我在練習寫essay發現有個地方怪怪的 However, other people who hold the opposite view consider a modern apartment building as more beneficial than traditional house 我可以這樣說嗎...還是要改成什麼樣的形式呢??
以下是引用ppcat在2005-3-7 12:39:00的发言: 我在練習寫essay發現有個地方怪怪的 However, other people who hold the opposite view consider a modern apartment building as more beneficial than traditional house 我可以這樣說嗎...還是要改成什麼樣的形式呢?
俺觉得应该as多余,另外,换一个更简单的写法可能更安全:other people who hold the opposite view contend that a modern apartment is more beneficial than a traditional one.