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1.Retailers reported moderate gains in their November sales, as much because of their sales of a year earlier being so bad as that shoppers were getting a head start on buying their holiday gifts.
(A) of their sales of a year earlier being so bad as that
(B) of their sales a year earlier having been as bad as because
(C) of their sales a year earlier being as bad as because
(D) their sales a year earlier had been so bad as because
(E) their sales of a year earlier were as bad as that
this sentence gives two eaully plausible reasons for the moderate gains reported in November sales. These two reasons are introduced with a formla that requires parellel structure:as much because X as because Y, the clearest, most efficient way to fill this formula is to follow because with clauses with active verbs, thereby eliminating the wordiness that accompanies prepositional phrases followed by participial phrases.
第一步:划线部分在中间,考细节
第二步:主谓宾齐全,考修饰成分
第三步: 看划线部分开头和结尾,看到了as .....as.....
第四步:as much because X ....as because Y
第五步:因为有a year later , 使用过去分词合适一点
2. Combining enormous physical strength with higher intelligence, the Neanderthal s appear as equipped for facing any obstacle the environment could out in their path, but their relatively sudden disappearance during the Paleolithic era indicates that an inability to adapt to some environmental change led to their extinction.
(A) appear as equipped for facing any obstacle the environment could put in their path,
(B) appear to have been equipped to face any obstacle the environment could put in their path,
(C) appear as equipped to face any obstacle the environment could put in their paths,
(D) appeared as equipped to face any obstacle the environment could put in their paths,
(E) appeared to have been equipped for facing any obstacle the environment could put in their path,
Neanderthal 穴居人的 paleolithic 旧石器时代
Because Neanderthals "disappeared", the verb describing their apparent abilities cannot be present tense, so as equipped must be changed to to have been equipped.
The expreesion equipped to face is clearer and more direct than equipped for facing
第一步: 划线部分在中间,考察细节
第二步:主谓宾 Neanderthal appear to do ,排掉ACD
第三步: BE之争,active clause is better B
3. More and more in recent years, cities are stressing the arts as a means to greater economic development and investing millions of dollars in cultural activities, despite strained municipal budgets and fading federal support.
(A) to greater economic development and investing
(B) to greater development economically and investing
(C) of greater economic development and invest
(D) of greater development economically and invest
(E) for greater economic development and the investment of
The idiom as a means to correctly communicates that stressing the arts is a method for achieving greater economic development. The idiom as a means of would incorrectly suggest that stressing the arts is a kind of greater economic development. The adjective economic is needed to modify the noun development, and investing must be parallel to stressing.
第一步:划线部分在中央,考察细节
第二步:主谓宾齐整,看修饰成分,
第三步:stressing 和 investing,排CDE
第四步:天经地义,留A排B
4.Unlike the original National Museum of Science and Technology in Italy, where the models are encased in glass or operated only by staff members, the Virtual Leonardo Project, an online version of the museum, encourages visitors to "touch" each exhibit, which thereby activates the animated functions of the piece.
(A) exhibit, which thereby activates
(B) exhibit, in turn an activation of
(C) exhibit, and it will activate
(D) exhibit and thereby activate
(E) exhibit which, as a result, activates
The relative pronoun which requires an antecedent,and there is none provided in this sentence .it makes more sense to make the visitors the agents responsible for the action of both the verbs -touch and activate.
第一步:找到主谓宾 ,the virtual leonardo project encourage visitors to touch each exhibit,
第二步:activates 的主语是谁? 是visitor,看到了touch and activate D
5. His studies of ice-polished rocks in his Alpine homeland, far outside the range of present-day glaciers, led Louis Agassiz in 1837 to propose the concept of an age in which great ice sheets had existed in now currently temperate areas.
(A) in which great ice sheets had existed in now currently temperate areas
(B) in which great ice sheets existed in what are now temperate areas
(C) when great ice sheets existed where there were areas now temperate
(D) when great ice sheets had existed in current temperate areas
(E) when great ice sheets existed in areas now that are temperate
In which or when can be used interchangeably in this sentence. The verb form here should be the simple past existed tather than the past perfect had exisited .
Now currently is redundant because both adverbs express the same idea
第一步:主谓宾: his studies led louis to propose the concept
第二步:考察定从,看到了age ,in which 和when 区分不出来
第三步: " had existed" or " existed" , had existed 有没有参照。led 有关系么? 选择existed
第四步:now current 留一个。BCE
第五步:B
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