prep2012语法61求解释~~~~~

suosssss · 发表于 2013-11-19 20:13:11

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Sculpted boulders found at Lepenski Vir, an example of the earliest monumental art known from central and Western Europe, includes 15 figures with human features similar to Upper forms and to Middle Eastern stone figurines.

A. Vir, an example of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe, includes

B. Vir, examples of the monumental art known from central and western Europe, include earliest of monumental art known from central and western Europe, include

C. Vir are examples of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe and includes

D. Vir are examples of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe, including

这题的选项有点怪怪的，可能是编辑的时候有问题吧，原题就是这样的，anyway，答案是B，我想问这里的D选项错在哪里，我觉得特别顺啊，挑不出错误
关于D选项的including，我从prep2008的笔记里找了一道说including的题，我看了看根据08的说法，including是可以用的，那我就更搞不清楚了T T
D选项到底错在哪里，求解答~~~~~~~~如下
187.

United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.

A. that included

B. which includes

C. including

D. some of which were

E. among them being

题目释义：DI was appointed to several posts……,including……

考点：

1. 定语从句；普通的非限定性定语从句要用which引导(个别非限定性定语从句依然用that引导，但不在GMAT考核范围之内)，而限定性定语从句要用that引导。(关于限定性定语从句与非限定性定语从句区别见07prep语法笔记)

2. 这里including并不是做伴随使用，Include和continue都很少有V-ing用法，这里的including是介词。

选项分析：

A．引导普通的非限定定语从句用which；改为which后，which与所指的posts相隔太远，也不太好。

B．根据句意，定语从句应该修饰several posts，故为复数，使用includes错误,并且时态上讲应该使用一般过去时；which与所指的posts相隔太远，不好。

C． Correct；including比which included更为简洁、明确，including介词短语修饰前面短语的核心词posts。

D． some of which与所指的posts相隔太远。

E． Being累赘；among them being修饰对象不明确(awkward)，并且无法引导独立主格。

小满枝77 · 发表于 2013-11-19 20:17:38

我觉得是编辑错了。。。B有两个include啊。。。你看看你粘过来的时候出错了吗

suosssss · 发表于 2013-11-19 20:20:05

小满枝77 发表于 2013-11-19 20:17
我觉得是编辑错了。。。B有两个include啊。。。你看看你粘过来的时候出错了吗
...

我没有贴错，原题就是这样的，我猜B选项应该是Vir, examples of the monumental art known from central and western Europe, include
我就是搞不清楚D错在哪里了T T

qianertongre · 发表于 2013-11-19 20:35:26

prep12的pdf上的题有问题，原题应该是
Sculpted boulders found at Lepenski Vir, an example of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe, includes 15 figures with human features similar to Upper Paleolithic forms and to Middle Eastern Nantufian stone figurines.

A) Vir, an example of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe, includes
B) Vir, examples of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe, include
C)Vir, earliest of monumental art known from central and western Europe, include
D)Vir are examples of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe and includes
E)Vir are examples of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe, including

qianertongre · 发表于 2013-11-19 20:37:11

现在选B没问题了吧，本人原来也错过

suosssss · 发表于 2013-11-19 20:43:58

qianertongre 发表于 2013-11-19 20:37
现在选B没问题了吧，本人原来也错过

我知道选B正确啊，原本的D选项变成E选项啦，那到底E错在哪里了T T

karinegao · 发表于 2013-11-19 21:31:21

suosssss 发表于 2013-11-19 20:43
我知道选B正确啊，原本的D选项变成E选项啦，那到底E错在哪里了T T

including 修饰错了，要根据句意思判断到底在修饰谁；
Sculpted boulders found at Lepenski Vir, an example of the earliest monumental art known from central and western Europe, include 15 figures with human features similar to Upper Paleolithic forms and to Middle Eastern Nantufian stone figurines.
1、标蓝色的分别是S V O；这是句子结构
2、include 是main verb 因为你读后面的内容是在说明这个boulders 里包含了15个什么样的figures
3、如果用including，那句子结构是 S boulders are examples of the earliest xxxx, includingxxx. 这时including 作修饰应该修饰examples, 即具体说明最早的那些xxx都包括了什么。但是Include后面的内容不是想说明除了s boulders以外那些最早的XXX，所以用Including不合理。
4、所以如果按照including那个选项，句子机构上是没有问题的；但是串上意思一定错

Prep 上的题和这个意思不一样；那个including的后面是在讲a list of things he was appointed to, i.e. 罗列出他被任命的工作之类的

qianertongre · 发表于 2013-11-19 21:31:34

suosssss 发表于 2013-11-19 20:43
我知道选B正确啊，原本的D选项变成E选项啦，那到底E错在哪里了T T

句子没什么问题啊。。。逻辑重心不对，强调的总不应该是LV是一个例子这件事情啊；

suosssss · 发表于 2013-11-19 21:42:43

suosssss 发表于 2013-11-19 20:43
我知道选B正确啊，原本的D选项变成E选项啦，那到底E错在哪里了T T

这样啊0 0谢谢，写的好详细啊！

suosssss · 发表于 2013-11-19 21:44:05

qianertongre 发表于 2013-11-19 21:31
句子没什么问题啊。。。逻辑重心不对，强调的总不应该是LV是一个例子这件事情啊； ...

恩恩，现在明白了，谢谢了~

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