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发表于 2013-8-29 21:50:33 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
复制过来后好多空格被delete了,应该不影响阅读吧

1        Peoplewho develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus onone skill only.



Perhaps no issue is as significant topeople, especially university students, as acquire skills. Despite variousresponses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding whether peopleget more success by developing various skills than by concentrating on soleskill, I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that there is no doubt that to becomprehensive on different aspects strengthen the possibility to reach triumph.

At the first glance, I have to admit thatbeing an expert in a specialty gives people a competitive edge to those whojust know general ideas. Since one devotes most of his/ her time and efforts toonly one profession, he/ she can get to a peak more quickly than if he/ shebroadly develop techniques. For instance, a girl who practices the piano fourhours each day can definitely perform better than a boy who only spends an hourplaying the piano while enjoying wide interests at the same time.

However, can you define emphasizing on onearea is a way to success? It is highly possible that one gets impatient andswitch to leaning another skill before become an professor in the previousfield. When obtaining a new skill, the crucial premise is to get involved inwhat you are learning. An ancient sage once said, a permanent interest is the fundamentalof success. A psychological survey shows that adult cannot focus on one taskfor more than 3 hours and children may only concentrate on one subject for lessthan 2 hours. How can you imagine a children still keeps enthusiasm on drawingafter sketching a cylinder for three days! Take my own experience at young ageas an example. I was forced to play the piano when I was only 5 years old. Withreluctance, I could not sit in front of the piano for more than half hour. Ifeel so boring to move my fingers through white and black keyboards and make nobeautiful melody but only noisy. Without regular shift to learning differentskills, one can no way stay high enthusiastic on identical task.

Besides preventing loss interest, what’s pivotalto broaden skills is to meet the requirements of employers. Because of intensecompetitions in business, companies in all industry set cutting cost whileincreasing profits as their priority. Recruiting employees with capabilities tohandle different tasks gives human resource department an opportunity to assistthe company meet financial goal. Meanwhile, due to high pressure to find adecent job with high payment, graduates have to acquire not only one skill. Forexample, my peer and I have realized how essential to prove ourselves qualifiedfor different positions when we were in university. So in order to beoutstanding, some friends and I took double majors such as marketing andstatistics. When I was seeking a marketing position in fast consumer goodsindustry, I surely have advantages over other applicants. Because the companyrequired candidates to be both solidly educated in marketing and data analysis.Consequently, with both skills the company need, I easily stood out among otherinterviewees and received the offer from my dream company.

After ruminating both factors including staya fresh interest in when learning and be competitive in job hunting, I am fullyconvinced that without paying efforts to develop different skills can onesucceed.

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-30 17:16:55 | 只看该作者
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