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少壮不努力,老大写作文。洛阳亲友如相问,就说我在写作文。

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发表于 2013-2-6 23:37:23 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

厄。。关于作文这件事真的是我最不想面对的T.T
破个题要破半小时,纠结来纠结去,总觉得三个理由哪个跑偏了,放在一起又没有整体性逻辑感。
好不容易开始写了又编不出理由,想不出表达,用不准词语,拼不出单词。


总之就是,惨!不!忍!睹!


BUT,我们的口号是rock toefl writing, 目标31+
所以哪怕开始一篇文章写了一晚也千万千万不要气馁,常积累,多练笔,相信自己在考场上可以下笔如有神的。


恩恩。
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2013-2-6 23:39:43 | 只看该作者
2.6 独立 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group.



Nowadays, team work occupies the most important position in variety manners of working. As a result, the ability of time management, communication, self-improvement and etc. are all crucial elements determine a successful working group member. Besides, an outstanding team member is always a good listener. People need to accept their fellows' advice and even criticism when necessary. Those who turn a deaf ear to other's criticism and stick to themselves are easily fall into a wrong road, which would affect job schedule, damage relationship, and impede personal development.


First of all, refusing criticism prevents the whole team group from carrying on the work. Assuming that you got some wrong solutions about a case while discussing, one of your workmates points out and others are agree, but you insist your idea and never admit the mistake. It is conceivable that the whole job schedule will be delayed due to your stupid insistence. Consequently, to maintain an original time schedule, great importance should be attached to a wise acceptance when facing criticism for a successful team member.


Another problem we cannot ignore is that a stubborn people has a negative impact on working environment. Everyone in the group enjoys other's nodding assent, but as for criticism, the first sensation might not be pleasant. However, as a successful group member, modesty is an essential factor to handle conflicts between colleagues. Angry as you are, the reason why you are faced others' criticism is the most significant indeed. Therefore, it is necessary to calm down and communicate with your fellows patiently, and thus to create a harmony working atmosphere for a better cooperation.


What's more, self-improvement will also be affected if one never accept the criticism from workmates or leaders. A fitting example is about my friend. Lisa, one of my best friends, used to be a member in the campus broadcasting station, and was criticized by one of her team members of editing a radio program with a outdated software for convenience, just because she was good at this software. It turns out one day the software collapsed, all the hard works end up by this unstable system and Lisa couldn’t regret more. If she accept the criticism, she could practice a new skill as well as save the group work from unintended damage. Since each of us is limited in knowledge and experience, we can improve our skills and attain a comprehensive thinking by opening to the criticism.  


From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that refusing the criticism will impede people's success in a working team. An high quality work on time, a good working atmosphere, and an ideal self-development need us to be more generous and comfortable to embrace the criticism.
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-2-6 23:43:59 | 只看该作者
这个写了好!长!时!间!
还参考了别人的例子一枚T.T  

尽请拍砖哦各位。  

P.S 那啥。这才写一篇算算时间就已经是节前最后一篇了。
明天开始回家and断网,我不知道还有没有时间帮跟我一组滴童鞋改作文。
so... 这可肿么办?
地板
发表于 2013-2-7 00:36:37 | 只看该作者
支持小花~~!
5#
发表于 2013-2-7 11:02:10 | 只看该作者
我也来支持花儿!~~~
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发表于 2013-2-7 22:10:25 | 只看该作者
这个写了好!长!时!间!
还参考了别人的例子一枚T.T  

尽请拍砖哦各位。  

P.S 那啥。这才写一篇算算时间就已经是节前最后一篇了。
明天开始回家and断网,我不知道还有没有时间帮跟我一组滴童鞋改作文。
so... 这可肿么办?
-- by 会员 corneliaflower (2013/2/6 23:43:59)



没事,回来再改也行,我给你改的也回来再看。春节愉快!
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发表于 2013-2-10 22:41:13 | 只看该作者
哇。。我来晚了!!顶花!
虽为水军,等年过完我们都要好好加油杀GT咯哈
我就是那啥洛阳亲友来相问了。。
8#
发表于 2013-2-11 10:30:27 | 只看该作者
强烈要求握爪~记得我第一次写作文的时候硬是吭哧了一上午,第二天就硬着头皮上考场了不过出来结果还可以- -这应该也算是完美主义加拖延症的一种吧,没关系,就算考前再拖延写的再水用时再长也千万别责怪自己,只要坚持练习,考场上一定会文思泉涌的。花儿加油!
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-2-15 12:57:47 | 只看该作者
TO
晨依:谢谢11。等你考完G帮我指点一下作文吧~~
teddy:好久没见。teddy准备去哪了?
SMS:你的已改好。我也不着急,迟到的年快!
浅:浅浅有空帮我看作文啊!哈哈哈哈,我不客气了><
慕禾:和慕禾一起干巴爹!!
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发表于 2013-3-15 15:03:14 | 只看该作者
写论文走神中过来看看花儿的帖子,想帮你改作文来着。没看到东西哈,到时候你传给我吧
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