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芳芳乐呵 · 发表于 2013-4-18 20:46:09

大家共勉之。。。。。。我不是一个人在奋斗加油！

maybeme_kwd · 发表于 2013-4-19 09:47:44

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普渡哥 · 发表于 2013-4-19 09:56:25

To sum up, the speaker fails to construes that it’s a extremely convoluted thing to judge whether a law is just one or a unjust one for people with different priorities will always disagree about fairness of a specific laws. However unjust a law is to an individual, to disregard it is never going to work in the right way as a legal way does. Because all laws are sublime and supposed to be obeyed by all the citizens under the protection of it.

这里很多语法问题，a law is just one or a unjust one , unjust 前面应该是an. disagree with.. a specific laws??. unjust a law?

However unjust a law is to an individual, to disregard it is never going to work in the right way as a legal way does.
这句话的主谓宾是什么？

芳芳乐呵 · 发表于 2013-4-19 10:19:14

maybeme_kwd 发表于 2013-4-19 09:47
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想说However unjust a law is to an individual, to disregard it is never going to work in the right way as a legal way does.
嘿嘿好复杂啊前面一句用的是倒装形容词提前，后面那句话 to disagard it 是主语。。。。
真的好久不注意英语语法了都是凭感觉。。。

芳芳乐呵 · 发表于 2013-4-19 10:20:28

普渡哥发表于 2013-4-19 09:56
To sum up, the speaker fails to construes that it’s a extremely convoluted thing to judge whether a ...

想说However unjust a law is to an individual, to disregard it is never going to work in the right way as a legal way does.
嘿嘿好复杂啊前面一句用的是倒装形容词提前，后面那句话 to disagard it 是主语。。。。
真的好久不注意英语语法了都是凭感觉。。。

芳芳乐呵 · 发表于 2013-4-19 10:25:50

maybeme_kwd 发表于 2013-4-19 09:47
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真谢谢你嘿嘿最感谢你的鼓励了我觉得GRE真是一个往死里打击人的考试我做verbal总是觉得时间超级不够更坑姐的是下星期就考试了。。。。

芳芳乐呵 · 发表于 2013-4-19 10:37:06

芳芳乐呵发表于 2013-4-19 10:20
想说However unjust a law is to an individual, to disregard it is never going to work in the right ...

看久了我也觉得好像有问题，可能是学日语和德语学傻了，日语就是只要有主谓宾，想放那里哪里放哪里。。。

fjzhang · 发表于 2013-4-19 14:49:49

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芳芳乐呵 · 发表于 2013-4-19 15:53:24

fjzhang 发表于 2013-4-19 14:49
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谢谢楼主好严格我知道我是有点啦对政治类的题目真是太无力了话说答卷的时候不可以暴露自己是中国人么

fjzhang · 发表于 2013-4-19 16:33:29

已改。。。

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