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030 It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

School（是不是该有冠词？） is the （后面是adj.,不用加the吧？）very important to any individual and plays a great role in the development of the human beings. When it comes to the issue as to whether a new high school should be built in our community, people in our community are likely to provide various responses due to their distinct background. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree to build a new high school in our community, and I will elaborate my view as follows.

The first reason of my view is that local residents can enjoy the convenience that a new high school brings. In contrast to the current situation, in which students are forced to walk a long way to the high school in the nearby community due to the lack of the high school in our community. The future new high school enable students （不是enable sb. to do sth.？ 能接can吗？）can arrive them（不需要介词吗？） high school in 10 minutes, thus making them feel happy and pleasure. Obviously, a new high school will provide a lot of convenience for the students.

Another reason of my view is that a new high school will bring a lot of working opportunities for people in our community. On the one hand, a new high school definitely means all kinds of job such as teacher （+s?）for the local people. On the other hand, other relevant store(other+n复数) such as stationery should be built in order to meet the need of students and thus enlarge the working opportunities. Both of these vividly（adv.不能修饰n.吧？） present that a new high school will have a positive impact on the working opportunities.

What is particularly worth noting is that a new high school will boost the development of the community. Due to a new high school, people obtain more income, which would be investment in other business in our community, and our community becomes more prosperous. Furthermore, students gradated from the high school will donate a large amount of money to the community given that a new high school create a good educational environment for them. These donation can be used to develop the economy of our community. Naturally, a new high school is conducive to the future development of the local community.

In conclusion, according to what I present previously, a new high school provides a lot of benefit for the local community. Although some people are against to build a high school based on other evidences, I still prefer to （是不是加上build比较好？）a new high school in our community.