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发表于 2012-10-17 20:26:49 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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104. To be an effective leader, apublic official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
想成为一名有效力的领导则,政府官员必须坚守最高E的伦理和道德标准。
Write a response in which you discuss theextent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing andsupporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/orexamples that could be used to challenge your position.


Outline:
公众应将关注的重点放在政治领袖的能力与才干上,而不是伦理的苛责。领袖毕竟也是一个人,要他保持highest是不大可能的。
  当然一个诚实可信的政治领袖可以增进社会的福利。比如美国开国之父华盛顿,在大部分人都请求他再连任总统时,他果断的拒绝了。从自己做起从而为美国总统确立了只能连任一届的制度。显然,选民不可能让骗子和伪君子去当他们的领袖。
  而用最高的伦理和道德标准去要求政治领袖,除了会扭曲他们的人格以外,还鼓励公众对政治领袖的苛责和不宽容,这反而不利于他们发挥才干。也许他们会经常去担心他们的行为和语言是否违背了某些人的道德准则。当前社会上没有对道德明确的规定。道德这个名词一直都是抽象的,不像法律有些明确的规定,哪些你可以做,哪些你不可以做。而且由于社会的多样性,并没有统一的道德评判标准,也许某些在一些人看来是合理的但是另外的一些人却认为那是不道德的。也许用highest的标准去要求政治领袖这本身就是不道德的。
  公众应该关注的是政治领袖的能力和才干,关心他们是否能给自己带来和平稳定幸福的生活,而不是带来失业、犯罪、战争。如果过分的高道德的要求反而可能会使政治领袖变得畏首畏尾,固步不前。人都有平常的一面,而一个政治领袖应该是一个有魄力、有能力和能带来公民幸福生活的普通人。


Text:
  The word ‘highest’ may be too rigorous for a public official. Public shouldpay their attentions to the capability and boldness of politic leader not theexcoriation to them. After all, a leader is also a person, it is impossible toclaim them maintain highest ethical and moral standards.
  Of course, a leader who is honest and reliable would promote social welfare.For example, Washington, the founding father of the Unite State of America. He refusedecisively to serve another term of president again while the majority of publicto ask him for it. He established a Term as President System from himself. Nowthe system has worked more than 200 years. Furthermore, electors would notselect a cheater or a hypocrite as their leader. Obviously the aftermath is unpredictableif to do that.
  Nevertheless, if public demand their politic leader as the highestethical and moral standards, not only would distort a politic leader`s characterbut also would agitate public treat a politic leader as scathing and intolerant,it is adverse for a politic leader to bring into talents. A politic leaderwould worry that whether it goes against someone`s ethical and moral standards when make a decision. There is not anexplicit ethical and moral standard at present. ‘Moral’ is always an abstract wordfrom its appearance, moral is not like law which existed a specific rule, whichwe can do and which can not. In spite of the diversity of social that has notformed a united standard for moral. Perhaps some people consider it asreasonable but another think it is not correspondent with moral. As the casemight be immoral to require a public official to maintain the highest ethicaland moral standards.
  Public probably should focus on the capability and boldness of a politicleader, should be concerned with whether the politic leader will give uspeaceful, steady and beatific lives not bring us unemployed, crime and war. It ispossible for a politic leader to be overcautious and controlling with thehighest ethical and moral standards. Everyone owns a face of common, a politicleader may be a common individual who is powerful and competent and may canbring benefic lives to public.



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沙发
发表于 2012-10-17 21:50:01 | 只看该作者
这个什么人可以改?
我觉得楼主的观点可以,但是语言上有些欠缺。
本人弱弱一枚,不敢给改啊。。。
板凳
发表于 2012-10-17 21:57:25 | 只看该作者
这个什么人可以改?
我觉得楼主的观点可以,但是语言上有些欠缺。
本人弱弱一枚,不敢给改啊。。。
-- by 会员 冲G啊 (2012/10/17 21:50:01)

大胆说出自己的看法吧,都是差不多的,也许你看到的问题,其他人没看到
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-19 20:28:35 | 只看该作者
没关系有什么想法尽管说出来
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